I liked it

O.O interesting XD

Cool

Cul

Moves a little fast but I am thoroughly enjoying this story:) Can't wait to finish it tomorrow!

where's my chainsaw so I can murder the pansy...good job Inuyasha.

love it and i always laugh when Inuyasha says the pansy name wrong.

really liking this now I kinda laugh at Inuyasha and his demon talk and FINALLY he made his desicion. really wish it happen in the show...

Cool story."

hey its me...ive had the edited chapter 3 ready since yesterday but its not letting me private message u again. is there another way i can send u the edited chapter. email or something? im really excited for u to see what i did with this chapter.

Awesome. I love it!

hey thanks for the props. im glad that i can help.

double check ur settings...cuz for some reason i cant PM u. :S

im liking the connection to math that ur doing...when kagome is asking about the courting ur auto spelling made he say doesnt when she shud have said what does...n just one more thing 2nd last paragraph put laid down beside her.

this was great! the beginning was a little rocky i thought but u moved into a comfort zone right after u got the ball moveing!

for every chapter that u re-write ill add my specific comments to it after just like this one _

take care!

okay i gotta say this...the story line was okay, but the gramma and the rush feel i got for it made it really hard to read. he looses his sword n then its magically back with him...no explanation, no nothing. just bamn. its like swiss cheese, lots of holes with detail and explanations. n there were some tenses that were mixed up. n refference to his/her.

it is a good story idea. but it needs alot of editing and detail added to it.

take care

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I absolutely adore the ending when everybody's families come back and Kaede gets younger