Wow...just...wow. Loved it! Just, wow. Didn't see much of it coming, though I suppose that's good. I figured it'd be Prime and Mirage to fight. but if they die in the end that's ok that they weren't. And there are many who could be good for Prime huh? Loved it!

This story is beyond words. The plot was amazing, and perfectly timed. None of the characters were OOC, and the story plot was just unbelievable I would have never imagined something like this.

ok, after this I'm done procractinating; promise!

Once again, a powerful story. Mirage's history is especially fascinating - how is code has been formed and how that affects his choices now, so long after his creation. Remnicent of how the experiences humans have in own development stages affect our actions and personality and beliefs later.

The very last bit, between Alpha Trion and Vector was, after reading it again, actually midly disturbing to me (if I interpretted correctly, at least). Those two, almost appear God-like in this instance, omnipotent, and thus control Optimus, Mirage and everyone else. They simply existing, being, controlling, and seemingly finding their power over others so amusing is kinda scary. They could do anything, and who could stop them?

shudders

Again, a very well written piece!

At a writing course I was at, the instructor said the hardest thing for a writer to do is write. Glad to see you finished it.

Sunny and Sides as Prime and Lord Protector? Oh boy, I wanna read that now but...argh homework. Which do I choose? Gah.

Loved the ending, so happy Mirage and Optimus didn't die or suffer or part ways. They deserved the happy ending :D

*is dizzy from so many prime* XD Wow this was awesome! It kinda hurts to know that in another universe all is not well T.T But at least, Op and mirage did have a happy ending in one of them. )

Great job!

Not an ending I saw coming, though I was really pleased to see the Matrix rearing its darkness again before the close. And the Megatron-based Prime as the multi-verse's champion is terribly fitting in this context, as well.

And who doesn't love a happy ever after?

I cant believe its finiiiiiished! Im excited and devastated at the same time! Haha i have to say i fully enjoyed the cheesy ending . But your so mean cause im gonna be craving more of this for the next month, none of which will be forthcoming DX Thank you for so much hard work, you've definitely created another favorite of mine XD I can't wait to see what you have next in that gold mine you call a brain XD ! 3

Oooh, that was crazy intense. Like...beyond insane.

Poor Optimus, having to go through that, to not know what he was doing and even ripping Mirage's arm off. Whooo boy. And Mirage, so level headed (in a way) in that he will do everything in his power as consort.

And what a twist of an ending! So well done.

(Oh, and let us not forget the awesome smut in the middle. Let love conquer all!)

Uhh... I am most definitely not against good smut - and it was good, make no mistake this last chapter - but other than that it was a damn good story, strongly written, unique and with interesting - and believable - characters. One of the best I've read latetly.

Hnnnnngh. I have no coherent words. Just...wow. You have some serious writing skills :D

Jazz you lucky dog! Wow this was so yummy there aren't any words! Gotta love Mirage's kinks XD Can't wait to see more!

*hands muses high grade*

Mmm, this entire chapter had me swinging from giggling madly to melting into a puddle of happy goo and back again! Mirage and Optimus are so hot together! X3 And poor Jazz wasn't entirely prepared for Mirage!

That last bit was my favorite, with Mirage taking charge of the relationship, leaving Jazz and Prime befuddled. :D

You're awesome!

I love this Mirage. I really, really love him. So great to see it move to a threesome. I didn't see that coming, not really, but I'm not surprised that way it happened. Really good chapter, and smoking hot.

My response to this chapter can be articulated in the same squiggly little noises of delight that Jazz was emitting in Prime's quarters. I am a very, very happy little reader. Thank you so much for indulging us as much as indulging yourself! 3 3