Reviews for Becoming Pack
9551832-Delete-account-please chapter 15 . 8/17/2017
Off to read part 3 of this series.
Account-To-Be-Delete-8815852 chapter 15 . 2/27/2017
Off to to read part 3.
MAFITA chapter 15 . 4/20/2016
Loved it! I keep wishing they were turned... but in either case, I really enjoyed seeing their journey to becoming a pack. I'll definitely be reading the sequel! Read you soon! Kisses!
ripper34 chapter 15 . 3/22/2016
Good story
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 15 . 12/2/2015
Amazing story ! Loved reading it :)
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 2 . 12/2/2015
Adorable!
sweet7752 chapter 13 . 10/9/2015
I reallyu like your stories. I'm glad that you had kept going on this story, and you made Gibbs sweat a little bit.
Kuma and Tony are sweet.
Ziva, Micheal, Damon, The love triangle.

You forget Ducky mating?
jdgatorbait chapter 7 . 6/24/2015
Oh, I LOVE the list. Please add to this series, also give us more lists, please.
athea781 chapter 15 . 2/16/2015
OK, I just read both stories from your "Cub" series. Are you really, really writing a third? I surely hope so. This series not only deserves another story but, many more after that! This is sooo good! I'm having a ball reading these stories. I've haven't enjoyed a series so much since reading the "Apprentice Adept" series by Piers Anthony.
There's oh so much more that can happen here & so many more adventures that should be told. Please continue.
I so love how the team is evolving into a pack. I especially like the fact that the McGee pack doesn't trust Abby at all. That's perfectly fine with me. (That seems like it might be a story in itself... maybe?...hmmm).
There's so many questions that have yet to be answered.
...What exactly is the Beta's roll within the pack? Are they the cement that holds the pack together? Are they the emotional heart of the pack? Are the Betas the breeders of the pack, the nurturers, able to give birth despite what sex they are? And why does other Weres feel that Kuma is unusually protective of Tim? On that fact, why is he so over protective of him? That was a story for another time.
... And what about the "like royalty" McGee's, surely the Hunters aren't finished with them yet. Those hunters in the first story were talking about "not damaging" the cubs. They said that they wouldn't be worth anything damaged. That makes me believe that they were contracted in some way to deliver the McGee cubs to someone else, right?
Please excuse my rambling, I tend to get carried away when reviewing a story I really like & would love to see continue. I figure the more ideas & thoughts I can jamb into the author's head, the more likely that author will continue the story. I refer to it as my "brain slush" it tends to leak out & make a mess everywhere.
Anyway... Thank-you for sharing your story with us. I really hope to read much more in this series!
barbarataku chapter 15 . 9/21/2014
want my very own were kitty Kuma and Timmy. As you can see I like the story. Thanks for sharing.
musme chapter 15 . 9/1/2014
I like it
LunaticV chapter 8 . 5/13/2014
oh jesus, mpreg! that's like, the best surprise kink ever :D
i wonder, how about Tim?
starjems88 chapter 15 . 2/25/2014
Loved it great story hope there will be more of the Pack in the future :)
JerryF chapter 15 . 2/17/2014
I wanted to thank you for a really great story. Please keep up the good work and write more. Maybe add some McGee Gibbs to it. Seems very few people write about Tim and Jethro being in a relationship. I know you would do a great job of that. Thanks again for a really great story.
DS2010 chapter 15 . 2/14/2014
Loved the saving of Ziva and the bonding of the team at the end
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