Reviews for Camelia |
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![]() ![]() post/122860453925/this-is-the-third-bad-fanfic-ive-read-today some one did this with your fan fiction |
![]() ![]() Crona's last name is Medusa's last name was Gorgon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, an evil Tsubaki. That's new, it got me excited. X) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jesus, how many times does Maka die before coming back? And wait...wasn't Kid killed in an explosion? There be some mysterious shit goin on around here- pardon the French. At any rate, nice fic (it was enjoyed .). Happy writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww that was...anticlimactic. Still, I like how you've kept everyone (except Tsubaki) in character (sorta). :D:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOO! I've been waiting for someone to do that. By the way, I meant to ask last chapter but...how does Tsubaki even know the Thompsons? |
![]() ![]() ![]() *raises hand* Although I would've said he was more of a raving lunatic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jesus. who cares about Maka; I'm still upset about Soul! Although I wonder who'd win in a fair fight- Black Star or bat shit crazy Tsubaki? Hmmm guess I'll keep reading to find out. Ok so I'm not being constructive...still enjoying this anyway. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh it multiplied... |
![]() ![]() ![]() My computer didn't tell me this was updated, so when I got your message, I immediately came and looked over the story. I love the chapter! :) When I saw that my pen name was in her, I freaked out! I started smiling like crazy and my sister asked, "What put you in such a crazier-than-normal mood?" I just smiled wider! Great chapter! I love the idea that she never really died after she disappeared. :) ~heart |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was vary ooc but really good at the same time I liked it alot If you were to make a sequel I would keep it on my follow list even if it took awoke it would be interesting to read |
![]() ![]() ![]() SHIT I'M SCREWED! I DON'T KNOW HOW TO DEAL WITH THIS! but great story. It was a great ending... until you scared me to death with the fact that Tsubaki is trying to kill me! *runs and hides* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tsubaki, are you hunting the flamers? HUNT ONE FOR ME! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The epic conclusion? What the fuck? I don't want it to end! And make Tsubaki pay for killing Soul! Or, have Lord Death bring him back from the dead! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Try me Tsubaki, lets see who wins ;) |