Reviews for Domination
sysa chapter 1 . 1/30/2017
Do... you happen to be a scorio?
Guest chapter 4 . 4/15/2016
I couldent stop laughing at the AN at the end...
I'm an insomniac, haven't slept in 4 days. Don't listen to me I'm delirious...
OMG chapter 1 . 2/22/2016
Well, another OOC story
Hybrid-Sunshine chapter 4 . 10/25/2015
Nah. The moral of the story is that L's a good actor when he needs to be in order to stay alive. A well done 'Light keeps L alive for personal reasons' story. You write sex scenes very well, even when they're not exactly 'pleasant' (non-consensual). The other parts of the story were suitably eerie and uncomfortable (the entirety of the first chapter [I think I have a fascination with L or Light rawly screaming], the cruel potential fate of L in the second chapter, and the dinner...). The anticipation build-up is dreadfully fantastic in this. Once again, well done. I wish you well on your future endeavors as a writer~
SugarPopPrincess chapter 3 . 9/14/2015
Hot damn :Ooo I've got such a lady boner right now x
Guest chapter 4 . 1/31/2015
I have no hope for an update, but man do I adore this story!
NigerianGeek chapter 2 . 11/2/2014
Dang. This is...kinda depressing. For L anyway.
DarkSapphireXx chapter 4 . 2/19/2014
lol, moral of the story XD
Likin' this story! I can so see Light keeping L as a prisoner if he 'won'. L's the only person who ever made him feel real emotion and feelings when all his life everything was just fake. And of course his pride would really enjoy having L submit to him as well. I'm a little confused as to why he's accepting these 'fake' reactions from L then. Maybe, as you said about the moral of the story (:p), it's how he plans to make him like it, and then hopefully give off actual responses? Maybe? That may just be the romantic in me who wants some more emotion and of course kissing! A lack of kissing tends to mean a lack of emotions involved, or at least that's what L and Light want to believe, I'm sure hehe. Looking forward to reading more ;)
Kittencharmer chapter 2 . 1/9/2014
Ah, so the old Velvet Prison it is, then? Well, what would I do in such a case? DUH! No question! If there's one thing I'd hate, it would have to be rotting in a black room in my own excrement! Then again, I am not the stubborn L. But hell, at least his visitor will be cute!
Lone Angel in a Trenchcoat chapter 4 . 9/24/2013
Perfect moral of the story. xD I'll take it to heart...well not in my own relationships (non-existent ones...) but in my own perverted thoughts. lol. Please continue! I would really like to see this progress!
Eoeo chapter 4 . 7/4/2013
Haha moral? Don't lose to Kira, and if you do... Make sure that you don't survive longer than a single gloating smirk.

Poor L... I'm obviously not too sympathetic since I'm still reading this...
Eoeo chapter 3 . 7/4/2013
Is L going to name his bear?

Awesome chapter :)
Eoeo chapter 2 . 7/4/2013
Damn. That room sounded like hell in a box!

Poor L :/
Eoeo chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
Fantastic start!

I'm glad that Light won't be trying to rape L in this :)
Dr Yu Minoru chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
I hope light breaks L :)
Good story I'll keep reqding
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