It’s a huge disappointment that you lost interest in this story, but hot damn was this a great ride while it lasted! All the characters felt very real, especially so with Jacob. He acted as the “absolute voice of reason/common sense” and with the amount of inconsistencies he pointed out were humorous. It’s a character trope I can very well see happening in an actual neptunia game. Honestly, I’m just happy that you wrapped up the Leanbox arc. At least now I can go to sleep knowing all is well with the party. That is isn’t a luxury you get very much in fanfics you know!
Now I need to find out if this story is adopted, since you did allude to the possibly.
Good luck on those original stories of yours!

Wait so jacob isn’t going for a harem ending darn. Joking besides liked how everything going so far though would like to see when he learns that the CPUS are hundreds of years old because he never learned that. Like the story so far hope you continue onward with it.

I can wait of the next Episode :3

Uhhh are we gonna ignore the gas balls that went inside Compa?

I didn't even get to catch up reading this one yet. I'm still waiting for a new phone before continuing reading fan fiction.

It's quite sad that you took the choice to stop this but I do not blame you.

As a fellow writer, I too have face the same problem. It is expected the writer would be busy with life in general but the major problems does not lies with life but the writers themselves.

You may have thought of the complete story. How it begins, how it ends, the journey that lead to the end, the colourful and fun characters that you give life, how they interact with each other.

I myself have thought of my story, both fanfic and original. However, once that passion you have when you started writing died down, it just become difficult to get yourself to write.

I know how the story going to go yet I can't get myself to continue writing. That feeling when you have this wonderful ideas you want to share yet. I have been trying to light it back up slowly by continuing to create my stories in my head.

I'm quite glad that while your passion for this story have died down, you wanted to create your own world and characters. You know that the story you moved forward to create will be less noticable than the one you leave behind. This I highly repect since this shows that you would rather have fun than for fame or money.

I wish you luck in your journey to create your own world. It has been very interesting with what you did with a templete world and its characters, and ut has been a great read. It will nice to see what you can do yourself. (No pressure)

Do not let yourself being chained to the expectations of the people and the block that many of us writers have faced. And maybe, just maybe, when the fiery passion that filled you when you first started writing this returns, you could cnsider continuing. There is a 'Continue Game' button on the tile screen for a reason.

This fanfiction was quite the ride, and quite the enjoyable one as well. I would binge read it over and over if I had the chance, but alas, stories become less "fun" the more you read them, as you would expect.

However, Thank you for this great piece of art.

I truly enjoyed it, from start to end.

Once again.

Thank you.

It was a really motivating and beautiful last chapter, I'm sad that this story ended like this but I see you have your own personal goals you want to achieve and I can't blame you for it I would do the same if I were in your situation but could you at least post in a review or an extra chapter how it was suppose to end.
I won't be mad if you don't but hey, at least give us a last pleasure
Purple: "Cough" Savior's tale "Cough"
...Get. Out
(Purple leaves whistling)
Sorry for that, I also lost motivation with that so I kinda get you.
But still if you are able to please do it.
It was a pleasure to read the story all the way to its "ending"
Shadic out
:')

shame this story is gonna be unfinished, i liked it. But hey here is hoping you come back one day and help wrap it up

Rip fic. It was a really fun read! I can't wait to see what else you can write.

Well... Shit. That sucks. Was a great fic tho.

Finally read through this story within a week and I got to say it's pretty good. The story has some good and bad but regardless I enjoyed it for what it is. One of the big things I enjoyed is the character interactions the party had woth each other. I barely know anything of the series yet you were able to make them work together, especially with a series you did not like. If you plan to make more stories my suggestion would be to make stories that you personally enjoy and want to delve into the world building of it. The negatives I would have to say with be some minor grammar errors sprinkled through the story. The scenes with Jacobs family could have been cut out and the story wouldn't have changed at all. Unless it's relevant to story then it could have been trimmed to save time. I really enjoyed reading this story, thank you for putting your time and effort into making it.

Well, it was fun.

Thanks for the reads man.

i love dis

Ah, Jacob, you pragmatic matchmaker, you!

"No goddess will hear you" Nep, you're literally right there to hear it...

Between Gust's medicine and 5pb's heals, the "third healer" is in for some insecurities, and it's starting to show.

Nisa's barehanded blade block was awesome, and then Purple Heart and IF get to do a cool team up attack. Double Tech! X-Strike!

And, regarding the author's note, well... I knew this was coming and know your reasons, but... I guess I was secretly hoping you'd have a last-minute epiphany, and rise up with a renewed flame in your heart, like a writing-themed shonen hero. It feels like there's still so much of this story to be told, and this chapter was a slow burn, mostly focused on fighting.

But it looks like there's no helping it. Since you forcing yourself won't do anyone much good, it's time for us to look forward to the final chapter. I can't hope for a continuation, but I can at least hope that you'll make the ending a good one!

It's been fun.