good story. i would have liked to have seen Bella tear a few chunks out of Edward though, he deserved it for lying to Bella and calling her mate a monster.

hahahahahahahahahaha! i guess she told him! that was hilarious.

THIS IS DEFINITELY ONE OF THE BEST FANFICS I HAVE EVER READ! Thank you sooooo much for making this story it has definitely been a joy to read.

See, drama. I knew it was coming. And somehow I knew he and Alice were talking about divorce but the dummies should have just told Bella what they were doing, though i almost bet Edward told Bella intentionally. He was trying to break them apart. The idiot. Surely he had to have heard Jasper and Alice’s thoughts and knew what they were doing? I can’t stand him and his arrogance. I don’t think I’d ever be able to be his friend. I’d be civil for the family, but interacting outside of needed moments there just wouldn’t be a way. I’d be too angry at him. The ass. For such a short story, this was lovely.

Well that was fun. Garrett nearly died but hey, what’s a little dismemberment among friends? Lmao. I have a feeling there’s going to be some massive drama coming. Also, where the hell did James disappear to?

This has been fantastic so far. But god I hope she didn’t just ruin everything. And Edward track them? Bahahahaha

Wow...that was a rough ride. I still think it took Jasper and Alice entirely too long to get their divorce. Not the three years, but the daily trips for hours per day. They really should have realized what it was doing to Bella, esp. if at the time she was withdrawn from Jasper, but alas, all things ended well.

Thank you for sharing.

For the holidays, I'm going through all my favorite fics and making sure to comment on them to show my appreciation!
I love this fic! The angst UG my heart! The ending was perfect! Btw, have you considered moving your fics over to AO3? They allow multiple comments!
Keep up the great work and happy holidays!

This is a good J\B. Story,

Loved it and reread! I just wanted to let you know that I posted a review of it under "the-ice-goddess" on Tumblr. I'll tag you if you have a known blog.

"Oh, sorry Bella, I know you kind of liked your life as it was and loved your father and all but I love you so you can't do or be anything you ever wanted to do or be before now but I love you so fuck you and your life you gotta go now and I'm going to stand here and incessantly repeat that I love you so you won't have time to pack anything that you might want to take with you because I'm a power-hungry over-controlling bitch so what you want is totally irrelevant to me and I love you and fuck your need for things you actually like or need and you can never be with anyone you actually love again but I love you so you can't ever call or see your dad again but I love you love you love you love you love you love you also fuck your life. Kbainow!"

Yeah, sorry, I can't get past this bullshit.

Great job! Wonderfully crafted story!

Wonderful story!

*Excited clapping*

That was wonderful! I loved this story soooo much! Just...wow! I love how Bella stood up to Edward and his mate at the end! This was very sweet and romantic and sweet and enjoyable to read :D

Great chapter! I love how long these ones are and I love Charlotte and Peter in them! Jasper is also very hot XD Hehe. Garret was brave for helping out!