Not listed as completed so I guess you have abandoned the story as it has been years since an update. Oh well, life is full of disappointments.

i don't know what to feel about your story. i guess it was a good one since i felt a bit off with your hermione. i thought she was a coward. if it wasn't fir fawkes and the attack she would have married ron even if she had feelings for harry. it rubbed me the wrong way that she would commit a lifetime to ron without confronting her feelings for harry. i guess i'm irritated with her because where i live, there is no divorce so i feel that before you get married you should think hard and be sure that you love that person and wanted spend the rest of your life with him. then again, it was hhr in the end so i guess my rant was moot.. thanks for the story!

Damn good story wish it had more chapters!
For as smart hermione should be clearly has a fault and is thick about love just as harry is, yes of course without friends and upbringing etc.. But not that dumb considering how ron is. Most line i heard out her mouth is, can't have harry next best thing is her other friend to be miserable with, but at least where a family in fanfics (if ron/ginny don't do something that goes to far for harry and leaves)
But anyway you clearly display the things finally in witch most fanfic has not touched.
So aggravating what harry says to tonks (complet facepalm) that tonks not smacks or hex him on the head, but i don't have to adress to point out you made it clear.

By the way mentioning dursleys coming? fucking real won't do anyone any good.
And a little hint of mentioning manipultion of dumbledore, so if they know why continue with the madness?
Besides that how the fucktard of MoRon clearly let himself see here... harry's done we need to go past him what? no best friend whould say that or other stuff he spouts. That hermione doesn't hex him badly is beyond me, which what some of what she said is beyond me that you would write that? that he is better then her etc.. ugh distgusting.
that she only see at that point almost to late what big mistake to wed him is, that's why i don't read r/hr story's.

Responding on what somebody else also had said, i didn't yet on fanfic but i wonder this fact myself. How did ron get in the chamber of secrets? that idiot fool never learns and is thick in head with his tempers. (unless he is secret parseltongue read that once in a fanfic, as if.)

Hi,

Everyone like Luna. She is so much fun to write.

Thanks,

Old-Crow

Excellent!
I really enjoyed reading your story.
Thank you for writing.

I love the story and I agree that it would take something like that to get the blinders off.

TGM

Wonderful.

All of your stories are just absolutely amazing!

Delightful! Thank you so much for 4 marvelous chapters and the reminder of why you are one of my favorite authors. I'm a Harmony fan, thank you again for sharing!

No one expects the Spanish...I mean neo death eaters.

Don't understand and didn't see any explanation for how Ron went from about to blow-up to acceptance. Otherwise, nice story start.

Delightful.

I have been reading a lot of stories. But tonight I needed a real "adult story." By this mean I mean developed flawed characters who know how to keep moving forward. Your great banter is icing on the cake.

Thanks as always

So far this is the most convincing Harry and hermione reveal their love story
not a back in time
not an accidental shag
a True made a mistake rectify it situation
brilliant

Wish you'd finish this... :-(

i would have like you story more, but you did the same ron cheating and want hermoine to be like his mom. did you ever think he pick hermoine becouse she not like his mom. and since we dont know that much about his mom she could be a lot more then a housewife.