Good job Sally.

I really enjoyed your story. The only criticism, which is, hopefully, constructive is that I don't think that John would have embarrassed Sherlock like that. Sherlock doesn't mind everyone knowing that he's a sociopath - probably because it's not true - but John telling everyone that he has a psychological illness? I just don't see it. I think that he'd get Sherlock out of the way and then rip into everyone without directly referring to it as an illness. As a claustrophobic person myself, I'd have been humiliated by telling everyone my weakness right in front of me. I don't think that I'm explaining it properly but I hope that it makes some kind of sense.

Am I the only one who thinks that Sally was in on it? "He could tell she wanted to finish up as much as he did, but for a different reason altogether." Not to mention the fact that she brought it up as soon as they were out and called him "Freak" again. I really hate her character. I might have to write her comeuppance, she's certainly overdue for it.

Aww poor Sherlock they were being mean to him " thank goodness john is nice _

Really good story; you kept true to the characters and setting, and showing Sherlock's more human and vulnerable side was a nice bonus. Good job!

Nice ending...

Great story. :D

Oh! So cute! Love your story :)

Aww! Love it x Great work!

Am I the only one to think that Sally is creepy in this fiction?
Thumbs down.

:O Sally did something nice? For Sherlock? O...o woah lol nice fix aww :) and I wanted to comfort Sherlock from the second he said "someone barricaded the door" nice job! :D

I didn't expect Donovan to be so 'nice', in a way. She's more likely to laugh until she realizes Sherlock is really freaking out then she would feel embarrassed or something, or she would keep on laughing until Sherlock got out.

Nice story.

AWWWWW...poor Sherlock. LOVED IT.

Ugh. I feel for Sherlock. I have sort of claustrophobia as well and the thought of being in that room *shudders* gives me the heebies. Yay for John for telling those cops off and for Sally comforting Sherlock through his panic attack. ;)

This is awesome. I do so love John :')