| Reviews for Greater Good |
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   monkeywrench542 chapter 20 . 9/13/2018 I do hope that there is a sequel to this story, very good write and very good story line. |
| Melissa chapter 15 . 4/25/2018 If what I found is correct, then a "clubhouse turn" is the turn immediately after the finish line, closest to the grandstands. Unless it's a "half-chute," where the halfway & turning point is the 'clubhouse turn.' But either way, I really like your story. Excellent writing. |
| Melissa chapter 7 . 4/25/2018 I just read chapter 7's "rant." You go writer. You put the "flamer" in their place with a great deal of maturity & restraint. In my 'opinion.' I agree with your view of the relationship between McGee & Gibbs. I believe the reason canon doesn't appear to, is because McGee never Really gets hurt in the show. But for those who don't see how Gibbs views McGee, I will refer you to season 14, episode 23- the point just after Delilah collapses. When McGee needs Gibbs, Gibbs is there for him. Rushes to Tim to provide comfort, encouragement & support. Gibbs is there for all his kids. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 11/8/2016 If I were any good at writing NCIS fanfics, i'd try to incorporate Lab Bat into it, just for how perfect that is. Same reviewer from the previous review, typing on a stupidly touch sensitive phone, so that's why it just cut off after 'food', which was so not the word of choice. Rock on. Get those flamers girl! #bodyswivel #ohsnap. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 11/8/2016 Hi, uhm, really living what I'm reading so far. Just, really juicy. Fun. I love the 'Lab Bat' thing, that was epic. You should trademark that shit. If I were any food |
| marthapreston4 chapter 14 . 4/19/2015 I like hearing from the dog point of view |
| marthapreston4 chapter 8 . 4/18/2015 Why is gibbs still yelling at someone who got the crap beat out of them you would think he would be nicer |
| marthapreston4 chapter 6 . 4/18/2015 Okay the superhero thing is where you lost me but I will seee where this goes |
| marthapreston4 chapter 4 . 4/18/2015 When will they learn keeping secrets never works out well |
| marthapreston4 chapter 2 . 4/18/2015 Wow I know ziva cares but I dont really showing that emotion |
| marthapreston4 chapter 1 . 4/18/2015 awwww poooer timmy |
| Kyrianae Narii chapter 20 . 3/13/2014 AWESOME! I adored the story line, taking an idea and making it all your own. Brilliantly awesome. |
| Saissa chapter 20 . 8/12/2013 I've read Periphery - great story! But this was a great story as well. And I stayed up to 0330 in the AM to read it! |
| Saissa chapter 13 . 8/12/2013 I just finished reading the first 3 chapters you have up already on that Roops Point story - so far its FANTASTIC!. It's called Line in the Sand. I hope you do continue it. |
| Saissa chapter 12 . 8/12/2013 OK so now I have a reason to detest Keating the next time I watch that episode - Last Man standing... |
