"Shitting on Montys grave". Somebody doesn't know that Pyrrha was always meant to die or that her VA was told ahead of time.

It seems Phantom’s activities are ironically causing the government to crack down on organized crime as a side-effect of trying to beat Phantom to their targets to try and catch Phantom. Lol!

Manami’s plainness isn’t the problem. Her voice is like nails on a chalkboard and her personality makes many fans want to punch her. Worst of all, she manipulated and twisted Kyousuke for the express purpose of ruining his potential and severely, almost cripplingly, damage his life all so that she would feel less out of his league.

Right, Japan is near the North Pole. Welp, there goes the girls’ scientifically nonsensical arguments

I can totally see Ayase being a freak in bed.

Nice Majikoi reference there hehe

LOL you really went an extra mile to make the guy anything but normal. I can see it when the game will be made public and people ask about bad end. It's gone be hilarious.

The guy is so badass that he even gained superpowers. I could read a thousands of chapters.

This story is one of my favorite Oreimo fics of all time. You should be praised for your hard work in writing this fic. As for ur YT channel, I’d like to share an idea. U could make a few AMVs based on this fic. There really aren’t enough good ones on YT unfortunately. T_T I hate the fact that this fic has been discontinued along w/ what I assume to be, some/most of ur other works, but it’s ur choice. What right do I have to stop you? You’re truly a gifted writer and a creative thinker. Ur fic was the first of the Oreimo fics I’d found that had Kyousuke lead a double life, and the first to have any kind of shooting/action in it. If I knew I wouldn’t get writer's block every chap, I’d offer to adopt and cont. this fic. I may adopt it anyway, it’s a great fic, and I’ll do my best to live up to ur and every Oreimo fan’s expectations. My only prob would be keeping up w/ ur chap length. With that, I ask that u plz reply to this. Thx for taking the time to read this huge mess of a review!

My only peeve with this chapter is the fact that kyouske an apparent martial arts champion and vigilante got beat by a girl using ju-jitus. That is so much garbage that I had to point it out.

Either you have also been cucked by western society and are in for a red pilling session. Or It was a honest mistake.

You had no problem pointing out the physics of kyousuke colliding with kirino in the same chapter so I doubt you're going to throw out all the laws of physics.

And if you really are an actual martial artist then you should know that a woman has no hope of beating a man in combat. It's reality, get over it.
A woman's best weapon is false rape accusations after all.

wait so youre the author of not one but two stories i like awesome and i feel slightly stupid for not noticing it earlier as i haved another D arc on my downloads for at least 6 months now...

Hahahahha this story is just as funny as the original. And I'm glad the Phantom group doesn't overshadow at. I like it more as a background thing.

Hey, I noticed this story has been on hold a while, but I really like it so far. It's entertaining to see kyousuke is a bit more interesting of a person. Truthfully, as much as I love the LN and anime, I always felt kyousuke was a little too plain. Whether or not you see this review, great job.

Awwww, I was really luving this thing. I'm hoping against hope that this awesomeness would continue on.

Well, I'll just be hoping here so,
-Snappy-

It's an okay fanfic, there are certainly others that are worse. But it baffles me that this one somehow has the most favorites of all the Oreimo fanfics on this site.
First of all, you practically shove the Japanese down people's throats. And you don't always use it correctly, for example the honorific -kun is meant mostly for males, usually it is only used in the workplace for women. Even then, it's only from a superior to an employee. It's fine to use Japanese honorifics and words at times, but it's really annoying when you include it in practically every sentence of dialogue.
Also, the story is . . . kind of ridiculous. I just can't take it seriously when you try to make a "dark" "cool" Kyousuke who's been tortured by his experiences and has all this shit about justice. I think it could be done well, but sadly you haven't. But that's not really fair, considering how difficult it is to create that type of story without seeming like you're trying too hard to be "cool".
It might win over certain types of people, and frankly that may be the only reason this one is so popular.