Great way to show the past through Albuses thoughts and memories. Heartbreaking to even imagine such a horrible deed, but a sensitive, powerful and necessary to be addressed topic. I think you dealt quite well with it.

Great so fat! More I hope soon!

This was a great story! A very interesting look at the relationship of Albus and Minerva and Grindelwald's war as well. Great job!

Bravo, lovely ending. By the end though it almost seems like you were going to write another chapter of her waking up and Albus confessing everything. Hmm, I like it though at the same time. It's not the cliche ending, but it's still sweet. Well, i have enjoyed this story and respect Minerva even more if tha's even possible.

Thanks for the lovely read as I'm guessing those dancing Dobbies worked out eventually. :) Best wishes!

-Yue Sai

ok so I'm enjoying this :-) thanks bunches

very touching. thanks for sharing :-)

Great chapter, my dear!

Very lovely beginning. This is the beginning right and not a one-shot?

I love how you write all your characters and set them up. They seem so real through your words, and you can feel their pain. I loved the part where Albus wouldn't care if he rott in Azkaban for killing Umbridge fi Min died. Well this doesn't say complete on it, so I can't wait for chapter 2!

Best wishes!

-Yue Sai

excellent but an uncomfortable subject for me. thanks for sharing