AWWWWWWW! That is so cute! I wanted to cry a little or shed one single tear! It would be really sweet if she actually was there. I mean, what if her ghost was there and only Shadow could see it? Maybe that's what he was doing. Anyways, it was so much sadder and cuter than Sonic and Blaze kissing nose-to-nose.

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww . I'm gona cry! And draw a picture
Great job it's so Shadow

I want to cry, but because I'm currently hoarse, I can't! Lovely story and portrayal, sounds like something Shadow would do. Aww, sweet.

It's rare nowadays that I read a fanfic that makes me feel this sad. Even rarer that it's this short.

Well done.

Aw... So sweet... I quite like Maria... She's so innocent... I feel almost sorry for Shadow, and his kindness and thoughtfulness is so touching. I can't believe people say he's emo! They don't have their only best friend shot!

Anyway, NICE! Good job!

That was so sweet! He loves Maria so much, and I can really picture him doing that for her. Great job!

This was just beautiful. I'm serious. Poor Shadow, I mean, Maria was his first friend amid all the chaos going on in his childhood. And now that she's dead...well...he's trying his best to accept it.

Oh god, I think my heart just broke.

wow. that was rather nice. a lot of these stories really need good reviews and this is defently one of them. best of luck.

-sly54545

That was sad, but sweet. Poor Shadow, I wish he could be with Maria.

This was beautiful

Aw, it's so cute!