| Reviews for Birthday's and Mud Pies |
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   MammaNita4 chapter 31 . 3/26/2019 This is one of the best stories I had the pleasure of reading on twilight fan fiction. I got very emotional reading it, I enjoy stories that make me feel things. I laughed as Jacob's misconstrue Charlie's name consistently especially at the airport, I cried when the kids were desperate enough to runaway so they wouldn't be apart. I felt when Charlie, Sarah, and Billy's hearts filled with dread over their children heartbreak. I became angry at Renee for her selfishness, cruelty, and neglect of Bella's well being. I felt the bond of friendship that blossomed by two innocent children. Great job writing this story, and now I am eager to read your other stories. Thank you for sharing for your talent with me. |
| MammaNita4 chapter 23 . 3/26/2019 Oh no! It's so sad that the kids got so desperate about be apart that they ran away. I hope Renee opens up her eyes and sees what she's doing to her child before its too late. A very touching chapter, hoping for a safe return of the children. |
| MammaNita4 chapter 25 . 3/26/2019 Renee is so mean and selfish, she can't see past her anger with Charlie. The kids are the ones suffering, so sad. |
| MammaNita4 chapter 21 . 3/26/2019 Oh no! Renee is up to her selfish ways, not thinking what is best for Bella,,,or even Charlie |
| MammaNita4 chapter 20 . 3/26/2019 Lol! Poor Charlie, Jacob's nickname for him is going yo haunt him for life...so funny! |
| MammaNita4 chapter 19 . 3/26/2019 Love this chapter...sometimes older children crave attention from their parents, especially when there are little ones involve. |
| MammaNita4 chapter 16 . 3/26/2019 omg! I laughed and cried so hard...this has been the best chapter i have read so far...oh my goodness...jakey is just too cute! |
| MammaNita4 chapter 13 . 3/26/2019 Aah! This piece spoke to me regarding sibling rivalry, always being picked on by the older siblings. But they are also the ones to protect you the most from outsiders. I loved Bella's view of not sleeping because she didn't want the day to end was sweet! |
| MammaNita4 chapter 12 . 3/25/2019 Kids will be kids...best friends...fighting...best friends again! Great chapter! |
| MammaNita4 chapter 11 . 3/25/2019 The older sister syndrome..torcher the younger ones! Lol! Great chapter, looking forward to reading the rest of this story.. |
| MammaNita4 chapter 10 . 3/25/2019 Another great chapter, I'm so happy for Bella & Jake...they're together again for a couple of weeks...their happy once more! |
| MammaNita4 chapter 9 . 3/25/2019 It's heartbreaking! Great job on writing this chapter, it had to be difficult not to cry through it all. Poor kids! |
| MammaNita4 chapter 8 . 3/25/2019 The condom was hiliarious! .. Poor little Jacob, he pack his bag & wants to live w/Bella in Phoenix... these kids are breaking my heart! |
| MammaNita4 chapter 7 . 3/25/2019 Another great chapter, I just love this story, but it's a heart crusher. It just grabs your heart and tightens...crying! |
| MammaNita4 chapter 6 . 3/25/2019 This chapter broke my heart and made me cry...Poor Bella and Jake |
