Reviews for A Trip to the Dentist
Pinlicous chapter 3 . 11/22/2011
Wow! From the very first sentence to the very last, I am really impressed. You kept in pretty good character! I really liked it. The few last paragraphs really made the whole thing, though!
Yabbit chapter 3 . 11/6/2011
good puppy

:P
thena-ditey chapter 3 . 10/19/2011
Heeheehee. Giggle worthy and good. Thanks for the awesome!
persnikitty5 chapter 3 . 9/9/2011
lovely!
Sparky She-Demon chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
Very nice. I might be putting up an IPS and Night World X-over on the site. Could you read it?

She-Demon
scubagurl22 chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
Interesting, they're going to finish their talk before jumping in the sack right?
whatamithegeekmonkey chapter 3 . 9/4/2011
Wow! I loved this!

I really really hope you write more about their relationship! :)

Xx
IamStoopKid chapter 3 . 9/4/2011
yayy(:
giggling-bubble chapter 2 . 9/2/2011
Loved it, loved it! :) I was actually a little disappointed chapter two was so short. :(
IamStoopKid chapter 2 . 9/1/2011
Just so you know, you marked this as complete... it was good though (:
Selene Illusinia chapter 2 . 9/1/2011
Lol, gotta love Marshall's reaction. And immediate assumption his ass is about to be kicked. Will there be another chapter?
scubagurl22 chapter 2 . 9/1/2011
And the balls in your court Mary!
Yogi Dee chapter 2 . 9/1/2011
Hehehe! I love this. Seriously, love it. Mary's so sneaky, but I'm glad she finally sat down and realized exactly what her dear friend means to her. Looking forward to more. This is sweet, funny, and totally believable. Outstanding work.
Dog in the Manger chapter 2 . 9/1/2011
very nicely done. I really enjoyed reading this installment. anxiously waiting for the next chapter.
scubagurl22 chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
Wow, very interesting! Chapter two please?
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