Reviews for A Trip to the Dentist |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! From the very first sentence to the very last, I am really impressed. You kept in pretty good character! I really liked it. The few last paragraphs really made the whole thing, though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good puppy :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heeheehee. Giggle worthy and good. Thanks for the awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovely! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice. I might be putting up an IPS and Night World X-over on the site. Could you read it? She-Demon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting, they're going to finish their talk before jumping in the sack right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I loved this! I really really hope you write more about their relationship! :) Xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() yayy(: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it, loved it! :) I was actually a little disappointed chapter two was so short. :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just so you know, you marked this as complete... it was good though (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, gotta love Marshall's reaction. And immediate assumption his ass is about to be kicked. Will there be another chapter? |
![]() ![]() ![]() And the balls in your court Mary! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehehe! I love this. Seriously, love it. Mary's so sneaky, but I'm glad she finally sat down and realized exactly what her dear friend means to her. Looking forward to more. This is sweet, funny, and totally believable. Outstanding work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nicely done. I really enjoyed reading this installment. anxiously waiting for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, very interesting! Chapter two please? |