Reviews for Secrets of the Children
Lucie Grayson chapter 4 . 8/1
It’s hard to read to. But I loved it. I hope someday you’ll continue this story !
Lucie Grayson chapter 2 . 8/1
When One found out for Julia, it broke my heart
1ttrobinson chapter 4 . 1/19
Wow! Powerful and Heartbreaking. Please finish. Too heartbreaking to leave it here.
CoolGIRL2012 chapter 4 . 4/10/2013
Hey I hope you have not given up on this
Guest chapter 4 . 3/4/2013
This is really great! I can't wait to read more! Please update soon! :):)
elvelover chapter 4 . 11/7/2012
great story, very unique and a great read I hope you update again soon
omry.grinberg chapter 3 . 10/28/2012
O.k. I need too rephrase that it's FUN to read, it's more that you're really good at writing villains. I really want to see Terra Prime die, painfully, if at all possible.
omry.grinberg chapter 4 . 10/28/2012
I can be patient(sp?). But I would appreciate if you you could write them longer. They're really fun too read.
scarletwitch0 chapter 4 . 10/27/2012
I had forgotton abot this story. I cannot stand the evil that men do. The reason I keep reading this story, even though it's HORRIBLE is that I hope Two, Three and Four will eventually be rescued or put out of their misery. They will all need therapy. And I hope Paxton and Carson gets their scrotum cut off by T'Pol.
scifiromance chapter 4 . 10/27/2012
Yeah, I bet it was hard to write, considering how dark it was! You wrote it really well though, I'm still really intrigued by what's going to happen in this! :) I'm particularly impressed with how you wrote T'Pol, emotional but still Vulcan, amazing! :)

Thanks for writing! :D

scifiromance
Jedi Master Misty Sman-Esay chapter 4 . 10/26/2012
Happy to learn that everything is in order for you; more or less.

Paxton needs to die for torturing those poor children! :/

*cyber hug* and I need to be thinking about sleep. About half an hour to go before midnight.
Alex Joleta chapter 3 . 9/6/2012
This is a good story. I hope you update soon.
scarletwitch0 chapter 3 . 8/26/2012
I love this! It gives me some closure with the series, as I didn't want little Elizabeth to die.
Yashida chapter 3 . 8/15/2012
Most interesting story!

Please do continue!
omry chapter 3 . 8/7/2012
That was awesome! I want to hug all the kids, & lobotomize all members of TerraPrime.
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