Reviews for Secrets of the Children |
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Lucie Grayson chapter 4 . 8/1 It’s hard to read to. But I loved it. I hope someday you’ll continue this story ! |
Lucie Grayson chapter 2 . 8/1 When One found out for Julia, it broke my heart |
1ttrobinson chapter 4 . 1/19 Wow! Powerful and Heartbreaking. Please finish. Too heartbreaking to leave it here. |
CoolGIRL2012 chapter 4 . 4/10/2013 Hey I hope you have not given up on this |
Guest chapter 4 . 3/4/2013 This is really great! I can't wait to read more! Please update soon! :):) |
elvelover chapter 4 . 11/7/2012 great story, very unique and a great read I hope you update again soon |
omry.grinberg chapter 3 . 10/28/2012 O.k. I need too rephrase that it's FUN to read, it's more that you're really good at writing villains. I really want to see Terra Prime die, painfully, if at all possible. |
omry.grinberg chapter 4 . 10/28/2012 I can be patient(sp?). But I would appreciate if you you could write them longer. They're really fun too read. |
scarletwitch0 chapter 4 . 10/27/2012 I had forgotton abot this story. I cannot stand the evil that men do. The reason I keep reading this story, even though it's HORRIBLE is that I hope Two, Three and Four will eventually be rescued or put out of their misery. They will all need therapy. And I hope Paxton and Carson gets their scrotum cut off by T'Pol. |
scifiromance chapter 4 . 10/27/2012 Yeah, I bet it was hard to write, considering how dark it was! You wrote it really well though, I'm still really intrigued by what's going to happen in this! :) I'm particularly impressed with how you wrote T'Pol, emotional but still Vulcan, amazing! :) Thanks for writing! :D scifiromance |
Jedi Master Misty Sman-Esay chapter 4 . 10/26/2012 Happy to learn that everything is in order for you; more or less. Paxton needs to die for torturing those poor children! :/ *cyber hug* and I need to be thinking about sleep. About half an hour to go before midnight. |
Alex Joleta chapter 3 . 9/6/2012 This is a good story. I hope you update soon. |
scarletwitch0 chapter 3 . 8/26/2012 I love this! It gives me some closure with the series, as I didn't want little Elizabeth to die. |
Yashida chapter 3 . 8/15/2012 Most interesting story! Please do continue! |
omry chapter 3 . 8/7/2012 That was awesome! I want to hug all the kids, & lobotomize all members of TerraPrime. |