| Reviews for The Black Swan |
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   AlvaConcero chapter 9 . 12/1/2015 I'm hooked. I realise this is from two years ago but if you ever have the time and motivation I urge you to continue this story! |
| ShinDragonX chapter 9 . 7/12/2015 I admit that this story is pretty intriguing throughout my whole read of it. I like the ideas you had put into the story itself and I'm quite curious on what will happen in the future. From Vincent training Cloud to Cloud becoming a Cetra, I would say that this was a story I had been looking for a long time. I always wanted Cloud as a Cetra and the white wings are a bonus. I thought that someone would never have those ideas but I finally got what I wanted. Anyways, I'm curious about the planet calling Cloud as her beloved son in the summary, plus there is yet to be a conversation between Cloud and the planet. It seems like Aerith and Chaos knows about Cloud's Cetra genes (I'm not sure I should had worded it that way), I have a feeling that Aerith will eventually meet up with Cloud again. I would put more comments but it is kind of hard when everything is jumbled up in your head... It is kind of sad that there hasn't been an update in a while... I really want this to continue... |
| Mirage chapter 9 . 3/7/2015 i only want to say one Thing... noooooooooooo...why oh why did you stop here...so mean and sad...crying sadly... i so Need to know what happens next...what will Sephiroth do next ...i think he i head over heals in Cloud and wnts him, but how far is he willing to go to Keep him save? And what is ith the Turks...when most ttargets that where killed by Vincent where also on there hit list why do they try to catch him, and now they will know that cloud is his apperantice what do they do... will they kill stupid donkeyass Hojo bevor he can get his limy fingers on poor cloud...atleast i hope one of his creatures will kill him bevor he knows anything about cloud! how fast will Seph and Cloud get together? so much more questions...please please with a cherry on top ...come back soon and finish this Story... thaat kills to reed a nice Story and dont know how it will end... PLEASE! its now march 2015 |
| kat1316 chapter 1 . 9/15/2014 please update this fic soon! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 8/6/2014 Anywho, pleas update |
| Shadowheart51 chapter 9 . 8/5/2014 Please update. This is a great story. |
| Tired1999 chapter 9 . 8/4/2014 Omg, the suspence is killing me! |
| RenoRenjiRed chapter 9 . 6/12/2014 Love the story! Can't wait for the next update! Totally engrossed in this and have to know what happens! Great writing and description! |
| yukio87 chapter 9 . 4/26/2014 Please update soon. Cloud has wings and Sephiroth found it out. What happens next? Please don't forget this story. I'll be waiting the next chapters. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/28/2014 Please update soon! |
| k chapter 9 . 1/16/2014 Great story hope you update soon :) |
| Xx-Vampyre-Ninja-xX chapter 9 . 1/15/2014 This is a great story so far Please update soon |
| Dog Lover 120 chapter 9 . 1/13/2014 Great story Update soon Can't wait |
| XXTakaraXX chapter 9 . 1/3/2014 i wonder what is the sword's name? |
| Guest chapter 9 . 12/31/2013 Oh man cloud is in trouble! I cant wait to see what happens next! |
