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Why would Moriarty keep someone who's not used to weaponry as a bodyguard? It doesn't make a lick of sense...

I've read this story many times, I love it, and previously I've alway read when John thinks 'shocked' as 'sherlocked.' I just noticed it was shocked. Now I feel weird and awkward.

I like your story, though. The way you shaped the characters in the canon divergence is very well done.

So glad that you wrote this. It is so well done and Jim did find out why John was so important to Sherlock after all. Well done.

This story has been absolutely amazing to read but now I'm kind of sad that it's over. I look forward to reading more of your work!

I love this story so far and cant wait to read the rest! Just wanted to leave a quick comment on something i found really interesting. Moriarty may be a certifiable nutcase but maybe john's secret power is grounding mad geniuses... After all he "tamed" sherlock (as much as possible for him anyway) and he even managed to get moriarty to give him a blanket to stave off the cold. It would be so funny if sherlock and moriarty fight over which one gets to have john... Like 2 children fighting over the same toy. :D

An excellent story with a well thought out and wonderfully written plot! Thank you for sharing it! : )

Brilliantly written. Fairly accurate portrayal of characters as far as I could tell. Love the random capitalization use; "Not Good" and such. Lovely use of POV and engaging, great pacing for the most part. Last few chapters fell flat, however, from what I consider a premature and anticlimactic albeit surprising end to the antagonist. If you wanted to spend as much time as you did on the aftermath, I would recommend using it as a segwey into a more engaging adventure ie their relationship progression.

8/10

I enjoyed reading! It was a truly great story!

i love how your Moriarty is spot-on! its really great how you do that! i envy you and your writing skills

Woooh. John isn't the only one with goosebumps. *shivers* I can't wait to read on.

This was very good. Moriarty was especially well done I think and towards the end I even began to feel bit sorry for the guy, least when he was being all needy and semi-nice anyways, I was also beginning to wonder if the only way john would get out of there as if he consented to taking Moran's spot built up a trust with his 'new boss' and then walked away that way...but I liked the Sherlock using Mycroft's resources to rescue him even better so...also really liked the clinginess between the boys after being reunited as though afraid one of them would suddenly disappear again but also liked that john was initially wary of Sherlock's hands. Oh and Aunt Maddy as amusing. Good story, cheers

I loved your Moriarty! This was great!

Really a beautiful take on how John reacts to being a prisoner of Moriarty's. I think he was completely in character. He, to me, seemed the only one who kept completely in character, actually. Moriarty and Sherlock were a bit off, in my opinion, but that was easy to overlook. Your diction was also rather engaging. Overall, I would have given this a 10/10, but I really could have done without this last chapter concluding this way. I would have definitely preferred that they not become sexual partners [or, even if they did become so, I would have preferred less of an allusion to that partnership], but this is your story and not mine. It does, however, cause a rift in the ruse of the relationship that Sherlock and John have with each other, as I see it more of an intense, deep, loving, and complicated friendship. But as I said before, this is your story, and it was riveting either way.

That was wonderful! I actually enjoyed the connection formed between John and Moriarty. You did a brilliant job with it.