Oh My Gosh!
I totally loved it, it was just so AMAZIIIIIING, GAAAAAH, JUST... PERFECT!

Haha I loved it
The Spanish is my lingua mater, so it was funny to see ir (also the translate wasn't very logic or right written and that was even fundieron xDDDD)
AMAZING JOB :D

I really liked this story. It's one of the best stories I've read.

Sequel! Maybe they have kids? Who knows? Anyway this story was absolutely amazing I made me cry and just ugh! Just simply amazing

I didn't really like it very much, but very well written!

This is so creative. An amazing look, I can't say anything other than that I liked it. A great way to insert action drama. Well done.

(I am the actual Amakatsu, this stupid place just won't let me sign in! _)
Oh I really enjoyed what have you done and hope for an update soon,I didn't review previously because I figured you had enough to shift through already! XD and I'm just a hassle. But I did read it all in one night, I loved Jade-n. A very creative idea I might add with a few really unexpected twists, I totally freaked.

Anywho on to this story,
Ooooooh that was awesome. Gave me slight shivers. So interesting and many questions to be answered, for a first fic this is great really. I don't think I came across something like this. And the dying urge to know what happened, how mysterious it is, I love it even only on the first chapter!

ohh i like this!

:)

I was liking the story up until this chapter. In the previous chapters we've been asked to suspend belief, even in the parts that it wasn't explained. But it was fine cause the story was interesting (I've even put my questions aside, to see if they were answer in some other chapter). But this chapter is just unrealistic. There's no way he would have been able to attack Jade after his penis was cut off. And in his injured state Jade could have easily fought him off but somehow he manages to stab her. And she seems to let him, which I don't understand if she's a good agent. It's dumb and if she's injured it would put Cat in danger. And if her major organs were puncture by his stab she wouldn't have been functioning for as long as she was.

I understand that storied can have unreal non existent things, but being unrealistic in this sense is another thing.

Wow. Seriously. First story you've written, and it's better than some of the more 'experienced' authors. ;P Can't wait to read more, but I've just spent a few hours reading this story, and I wanna play SWKotOR. XD Go Star Wars~!

Aw, I got a little brother too~! and he says the same thing. ...

-_- Loved this chapter, Cat is always sexy when she's "evil". ;P

Don't be discouraged! It's just that we all have exams. S

I can probably figure out the answer to that riddle, as my class plays this game all the time. P

O_O O -shock-!

I shall not bother thinking bout the riddle, must. read. MORE! xD

Envelope? I epically failed at the last one.