Love the story line but you should really proof read, a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes in here

you should finsih this

loved it

Really good! Work hard in school!

I'm really enjoying this story. I like how you've put Sarah staying with Tim over the summer it's a great idea plus Sarah being a year older than Jessie. I predict that Sarah and Jessie will be getting into a lot of trouble together over the summer.
Please please please update soon

I think that you should either update this one or make are really good and Jessie is a great character too!It stunned me to see McGee angry because in the show he really is the laid back nervous probie!Next time I think that Ziva should spank her...(idk just a weird thought!)CONTINUE IM BEGGING YOU!

If my siblings tried to spank me I would cut off their hands that is so sick. I hope u dont have siblings. Spanking your sibling should be seen as rape. Spanking anybody over the age of 12 should be seen as rape.

what about the spanking for being on the computer otherwise exellent work

hope there is more coming

Boy I sure wish you continue to write your stories. I like Jessie.

great story hope you can update soon :)

Great Story - Good Job! I would like to see/read more. Hope you will continue on with it, would love to see a new chapter up soon. Thank you for writing this, I enjoy reading the fanfics of NCIS. Thanks again Great Job!

I think that Jessie would have hugged Gibbs and told him that she was glad that he was back, esp. since she missed him so much...more than what she thought that she would. Good story.

Ooooh, is Gibbs going to tan her saucy behind with a good old' fashioned bare-bottomed spanking?

Oh no. Two infractions to deal with. Glad she was happy to see Gibbs. I like the progression I there relationship