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![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for sharing :) :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() The quote at the end was heartbreakingly beautiful. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awww poor Reid |
![]() ![]() ![]() I miscarried unawares I was pregnant. My partner and I hadn't been trying for a baby, but God, it hit just like this. This touched my heart because I've been there and there is nothing illogical about what Reid felt. This was very well written. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was incredibly sad. What a horrible thing to happen to someone, to a couple. This story really needs more written. I feel like I need to read about what happens next with Morgan and Reid, and if they can move forward with their lives. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful. |
![]() ![]() Beautiufl AND TUCHING :'( PLEASE UPDATE IT MAKE ME cRY /3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG it was soo good TT_TT at the end I was literally crying ! D: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww... so sad... kind of makes me think of the song 'Lucy' by Skillet... it would fit this moment perfectly... A beautiful piece of writing x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Spencer he's always losing the baby. hehe I'm writing a story where he lost the baby (not an abortion) and I felt so bad. nicely written by the way |
![]() ![]() ![]() A person can never underestimate the power of hormones, too. While the loss is undoubtedly painful, like an opportunity you never realized you wanted but then missed, the after effect of delivery or miscarrage is dreadful. I remember being bouncy at breakfast, and sobbing hysterically at lunch after my daughter was born. This was good and loving and sad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was wonderful and compelling. I really hope that you decide to continue it in some way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh... That's sooo sad. T.T but i love the quotes and great job with the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is my favorite of the angst bingo fills. Not is it emotionally powerful, but IMHO, it showcases just how well you understand (and can write) Reid, who is definitely a complex character. So many people see how much he relies on facts and statistics and make him out to be a robot - stiff, mechanical, unemotional. Others take his beta personality and "feminize" him (I hate to use that term because I hate that people associate these traits with women) - hysterical/overemotional, weak, fickle. But this fill is the perfect balance of his logic (how can he miss something he didnt know about and didnt particularly want?) and his emotions (the realistic reactions of guilt and loss that tend to follow a miscarriage). To top it off, Morgan is well written, even in an understated kind of way. The fill focuses on Reid, but Morgans pain is still there and his reaction to Reids grief and guilt is spot on. Gods, I just love it. |