Absolutely gorgeous to read! Splendid!

I love all your stories and this is late so I doubt you'll read it, but you are an amazing writer with so much talent and potential and beautiful ideas.

I liked reading this, the story has good, steady pace and the characters felt natural.
Reading abbreviation such as "FYI" feels unnatural though, I had to stop reading and look up what it means. Their place is in chats and text messages, not stories.

I really enjoyed your depictions of Shion and Nezumi! This fic was sweet, sexy, and all around a great read! Thank you for sharing :)

D'aww!

Oh my. Ohhhh myyy. I enjoyed that veries much. Veries much. Ands remembers, don'ts apologizies fors somethings yous enjoyed!

Great job! It was really in character

I'm ... speechless ... I don't understand why all of your NO.6 FFns are so beautifull. It's like you are Asano Atsuko's herself. The character, the sweet feeling in the story, as if it is a classic music played for my ears to hear and my heart to feel. Again, I'd like to say that I love your beautiful diction and writing style. It's as if every theme of story will turn out to be really amazing in your hand. I know my sentences seem so disgusting and cheesy but those are honest from my heart. No.6 is the best novel I've ever read and here you manage to build the nearly same feeling just like in the real novel. Shion is such an innocent boy. And I love how Nezumi tries to deceive his true feeling for him.

... and I love the ending's sentences.

Keep writing!

KensyEcho

This is one of my favorite stories (if not my favorite) for this pairing. Each one of Nezumi's thoughts and each one of Shion's reactions are just perfect.

You did this pairing justice, I'm glad I got to read this. Congratsulations.

The was so dark that it broke my heart and I didn't cry, but that's I good thing cause I don't think that was the intention with it :3 it did move my heart though and I found it really sweet and loveable X3

love it...yeah, and it's Hot too...really really like it a lot, no wait love definently...very Hot

THAT WAS BEAUTIFULLY ADORABLE. IT WAS SO CUTE I NEED TO PUNCH SOMETHING TO FEEL MANLY AGAIN. ;w;

OMG sooo goood :'D The last line had me squealing.

So amazing and believable. Love how well everything flowed and how in character both Shion and Nezumi was. It was so Shion to be all scientific about copulation. The ending was soo sweet.
Thanks for sharing.

rfghiuwbfouwbvwouvbwodsubvod fujkbivuowsbdfucjkbkysdhjfbc stop.
omfg.
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