LOVED it! Such a good story.

Please say you have plans of updating! I just found this story and I'm in love with it.

very interesting.

Oh my I like this chapter

Good one ! Hope to see how the relation between Derek and Stiles will become.

AWWW! I love this chap most! And I hope Derek does change stiles

Good story, I liked the first chapter most. I am intrigued by the thought of a different Derek and his family dynamics. Can't wait for the next chapter

Love this story and can't wait for update soon :)

1. Love that song! 2. I feel like a nerd bcuz I knew it was dragon ball Z! XD 3. I LOVED IT!

Aww I loved the memory!

I love this story so much! It's like I get lost in the wirks you've created! Please update soon!

This scene was so beautiful in so many ways. The personification that you gave to the moonlight was beautiful it really was as if it had taken the embodiment of his mother and was standing guard over him. Also I liked how you wrote Stiles and Scott many of the things you had Stiles do were extremely Stiles like from the spinning of the chair to bouncing on his feet when nervous. Can't wait for the next installment.

There's the occasional grammatical mistake but aside from that you're an extremely talented writer. I really do quite enjoy your depiction do Derek and his family.

That's probably the best fic I've read on here, excellent writing.

Just some con-crit, there are a few grammar/spelling mistakes that I'm sure you'd catch if you got a beta or just reread carefully. Other than that, I'm in love with your writing.

LOVED it! Update soon.