Oh nuuuuuuuu!
Dang, Artemis. Help my child
Great chapter!

Shoot dang my boooooooy. Poor Kaldur. An excellent t chapter.

This is fabulous. I love how Dinah understand the team and that Kaldur recognizes it. And I love Robin deciding to go to Mgann to spar. Absolutely wonderful! Also really enjoyed the line, she makes them whole when they're broken :D

Wow. I can see where you're going with this. The Team, slowly but surely going to hell. I like Robin the best in here (even though everyone is written so well, you wonderful person), this lovely little psychopath. Hehe. He's always been balancing on a thin line, and I have the feeling he might eventually go off the deep end in this story. ...I can't wait.

"Gotham does that to people." Dang. I really love how you write Robin.

So happy you updated! I love the direction this is going in. It's so well written and raw with emotion! I do hope we get another chapter soon. Thank you for not abandoning this wonderful little gem!

Ah Artemis, my sweet summer child, what a lovely way to come back! The way she and her dad handled Paula's shooter was scarily believable... And when Robin said he knew "everything" ohhh boy, poor darling girl.

I thought that having M'gann pose as a wheelchair-bound woman was quite an interesting choice. Even if it didn't make sense, strategically, for her to assume a "non-threatening" disguise to the casual eye, the inclusion was refreshing cause I'm sure I've never read that being done before, for her.

Welcome back! :)

OH MY GOSH ARTEMIS-AND THEN ROBIN, AND THEN-
This is AMAZING, I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Eerie and wonderful and yet nondramatic.
I like this a lot, shame you didn't finish it.

It's been 15 months since this story was updated so it's probably dead, but if the author is still watching, I encourage you to keept writing this! It's well-written and the characters are believable. I am really interested to see where this story could go, so I hope you'll consider revivng this :)

Please tell me this is still alive, your writing style is awesome and I really am interested in where this is going to go. I really really hope that you continue this story.

very interesting in a good way i cant wait for more

Please please please update! this is wonderful!

That was beautiful. i mean really adn truly a work of art. their team work adn their togetherness i all of it. i loved it and can't wait for you to udpate.

Pardon me while the tears run down my face. This. Is. Beautiful. I mean, it's terribly depressing and gives me all the feelings and is making me cry, but the wrting is just gorgeous. The Wally stuff was all so well done. Gah, this is amazing.