Mate, it's been a couple of years since you've updated this. I even began reading this a couple years ago and have returned to it. AND STILL NO UPDATE. PLEASE UPDATE

up date please? I want to see the ending!

Update please!

Pfft, you're clearly not too much of a blushing schoolgirl if you've written this much ;)

The basic premise of this story is quite enjoyable, as is the smut. I also like that Alfred and Arthur are taking their time getting into a relationship with an extensive amount of flirting and confusion. It feels slightly more realistic (at least as realistic as any pirate story can feel.) Alfred does seem the sort of handsome, cheeky lad who would capture Arthur's attention.

As for writing style, I would suggest that a number of your sentences could be shorter and more direct. For example, you wrote: "Alfred was in a haste to do what the captain ordered him." This sentence could be rewritten as "Alfred eagerly obeyed" or "Alfred hastened to follow orders" or "This was one order Alfred was happy to obey" (if you want to emphasize Alfred disobeying other orders). If nothing else, the "him" at the end of the sentence is unnecessary.

Thanks for the story! I'm looking forward to the ending.

HOLY CRAP THIS IS HOT! -bloody nose- p

Noooo! You would stop at the good part! :(
I hate you! D': But I'll love you of you update soon!
:D

I'm sooooo late! But I don't mind filling it in at all I have good imagination.

kolkolkolkolkol

Since school is almost over and we're not really doing much, I read this in my classes. HOLY CRAP.

Good things my friends are yaoi fans, that stuff...not that I'm complaining. I mean, I'm in no way a closet perv so go ahead and keep writing this stuff. The story is great, so far I like the plot and I wonder where you'll take it. I do hope you update soon, I'm subscribing and favoriting.

Jeez. This story is both hilarious (sometimes) and sexy (most of the other times). Fantastic.

-Mallory

No cliffy! why! at the best parts to!

I feel like a lot of people end there though, well great job though!

Love it

FINALLY! THE GLORY MOMENT HAS ARRIVED!

awww, whyd you stop?

Please update soon!

Kesesese Alfred's so naive.

WHAAAAAAT, I WAS GETTING SO INTO IT- YOU COCKBLOCK. :

Anyway! I love this story, no matter if you end it soon or not. And honestly, this is probably the best pirate!USUK story I've read.

I will be patiently awaiting your update (and hopefully a continuation of sexings from this chapter? eh, probably not. Oh well.)