Great! Dark but not too dark. He tries so hard to convince himself. I have only seen the movie once also, but you fanfic is very good! Great! Even though you have almost all diglouge I can still see the scene play out in my head. Lovely!

Angeline

You have no idea how excited I was when I saw this in my inbox. I was like YES GIRL YOU GO!

Ahem.

Very excited.

Anyway, this was VERY good! Especially for a first shot at at Swing Kids fic. I don't think I could ever write a good one! GREAT job!

I'm working on the story where Jack gets sick...School started today, so we'll see what time allows!

~Rosey