WTF that was a recap of the helicopter crash spent 6 hours on it and cant come up with anything original?

Lovin it! Pls write more? Its tErry btw not tarry

Good story actually. There're some typos/grammar errata but not messing up the story.

I'm not native english speaker myself (it's like second to fourth language here) but I'm tempted to Beta this, though lacking computer. But if that's not a prob I could give it a try...

I'm a really big Rabbit/Marisa shipper, but, since no one posted something new in a long time I decided to give it a shot. It's really good, but you had a couple of mistakes. No big ones though. I won't judge, because I'm not a native english speaker so, I think I'm not the one in talking about grammar mistakes.

-Katarina