This story is breath taking. And it's your first ever! If that is correct, you can do so many great works of writing, I tell you. Metal Sonic, in my opinion, is an interesting character, even though he is just a robot that became self aware. I'll finish reading the story, but for a first chapter, it's a good first impression, and it forshadow's what is to come.

This was a really good fic, it's that it ended, but to this day I come back to it and read it again and again, cause I think it's that good :)

WOAH THIS FIC MAKES ME SO HAAAARD
HOLY SHIT

Best iv ever read

You're amazing. Never forget it.

Didn’t they remove ‘Omega’ the squirrel?

Omochao gun... XD

Dang it sonic, you just missed him! The hedgehog in the suit was the one you were looking for!

man, 5 years, and i still want to see how this story ends, if anyone, ANYONE, tried to finish it, i havent found it, if anyone sees this, please tel me

Nooooooooooooooo!

I'm really enjoying re-reading this.

You might be embarrassed by your old work, but I've always loved this story. It's so different and well-told, and every once in a while I find myself coming back to enjoy it. Thank you, sincerely, for writing this fic. Whether or not you choose to continue to make art in the future, know that you have made at least one person very, very happy.

goodbye...

Don't get me wrong it was good, but Sonic would may have been jelly for a week at tops, then be back to normal and accept Metal, and that isn't Sonic' s past. You kinda made Sonic a really bad guy..

Y'know, if this was ME in this situation, I'd just say: "why should I care? None of this is real. It's just a DREAM." And then probably kill NIGHTS. I'm dark and macabre, so sue me. And no matter how much people tried to say "it's not a dream." I'd say: "well, I am asleep, correct? And this is the world of dreams, only accessible via dreams, correct? So logic dictates that all of this is a dream."

Sincerely..
A guy who knows NOTHING about NIGHTS.