You have captured the personalities of these characters perfectly in this delightful piece. It is as though it was written for the show. Everything about it is perfect. Thank you so much for sharing. Would love to see you write more of this Hawke family.

Enjoyed it.

Oh I loved this. It was very well done and I could just feel Hawke's pride coming off the page :)

I liked this. Enjoyed the bits of humor, and the child.

Ah, this was just precious. And the line about the 'gaudy Santini Air helicopter' was the icing on the cake. Nicely done.

i enjoyed this peek into what might have been, particularly written from someone else's point of view...thanks for sharing...

You are developing into a really good writer for this forum. Taking the characters in a new direction while keeping them who they are at the core is difficult; but, you managed it expertly in this story.

What a treat, the return of one of my favorite characters! Well-written. A happy story.

That was insanely cute. I love that String and Caitlin had St. John. Good job :)