Reviews for Paramour
StoryTimez chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
Oh god, I'm crying right now. There's so much pain in this story. It's well written, and I wouldn't mind this being a series of them coping with this
Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
Wow you are such an amazing writer! I actually felt like I was there. Woaaah.
XxZessxX chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
It was good. Really good and you broke my heart *sniff*
I'm nearly crying here. This bastard of an unsub. How can Reid's and Moregan's relationship possibly survive this? Something so traumatic.
torajune28 chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
No. That hurt. I'm crying. They'll never be together again. They can't be. You hurt me. But it was sickly amazing. I hope I don't offend you with my review because even though I'm hurting I did enjoy it.
AngiePowers493 chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
This was just fucking amazing - one of the best pieces I've read. I FELT the characters. I just...UGGGGHH. I'm speechless. I don't know what to say. This hurt, I choked back tears because they could nt cry, AND EVERY SINGLE DAM TEAR CAME FLOWING WHEN THE TEAM CAME. I love how you left it - how little yet so much we saw or Spencer and Derek, and we say practically NOTHING of the team. All of it - beginning, middle, end. So amazing.
Thinking about it, my only issue was the beginning - I could nt quite follow.
Trahnfisch chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
is there a sequel out there? will they be alright? oh my god! i really hope they can get through this!
delia cerrano chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
Ugh! How to save this couples relationship? There must be a way.
blackroses chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
the sex was hot
caramellove chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
interesting
encanta chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
Oh my god. Fuck-or-die is kind of my kink (OH WELL) but this really took a different turn than the other ones I've read have and it was really effective. The angst, the build-up... it was heartcrushing and perfect. The last line was like a stab in the gut. Lovely story. (Although that feels like the wrong adjective).
Maddox chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
Wow, really well written, I love the role reversal and the emotional complexity of the story.
Melle22 chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
This breaks my heart. I feel their budding love fracturing, even their friendship possibly irrepairably damaged. Them needing a lot of time to even meet eyes again.

This was just painful.
ImmortalMonkeyX chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
wow...heartbreaking,

is there any chance of u continuing this?
planetofmars chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
I liked this, even though it hurt me to see them have to hurt each other. Spencer emotionally, obviously he would never want to do that to Derek, and of course Derek got the physical end, but even with his mental strength, it's something that would be very hard for him to overcome.

Very well written.
yugiyamisex4eva chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
oh my poor babes
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