Reviews for His Servant, His Slave, His Friend |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I thought this was really good |
![]() ![]() This is very good would love another chapter |
![]() ![]() BEAUTIFUL. me begging for more. |
![]() ![]() This is really good and it would be awesome to continue it |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should really make more of this story! Pretty pretty please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... I absolutely love this story! |
![]() ![]() it's good and sad but i love it all the same |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg will you add another chapter? Plea?¿ |
![]() ![]() ![]() really great beginning in the chapter but I got kinda confused throughout the middle of the chapter thinking, "What time era is this taking place in and which country?... London, England? Idk :P " well either way it doesnt suck. Im gonna keep reading! :D |
![]() ![]() I actually really liked this story. You wrote it well and I thought it had a good ending. Thanks for writing it! It was great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The entire story was overall good, however, I feel like you should delve a little deeper into Arthur's change. Obviously he changed from before to when he was a prostitute. I mean, it is a pretty drastic change. And becoming a prostitute, does he feel worthless or does his line make him feel worth. Also, please expand on why Arthur was crying at the end. Oh, and please another chapter. *pouts* I would love to see how his new life is. (Sorry for the critiques I mean, it was a wonderful story.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It must indeed be the end times cher. I'm quite happy, though I kinda want to know how Arthur kept trying to kill himself. And maybe another chapter...? |
![]() ![]() wow. two years. your amaze me |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aaaa! I never thought you would update! I am soo happy to read this! Your doing great, keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're back! Does this mean we will maybe see Foster Care updated? |