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Ok, now that that stupid joke is out of the way, let me finish up this review. This chapter was just as intense and tense as the last, all the building tension is driving me insane, the Mag and Shilo stuff is so sweet but so frustrating (just because of Nathan), Nathan's still terrifying, Rotti's apparently joining the fray (hypothetically) and man, this story was a stressful read but I'd read it over and over again (actually, I have, I've read all your Repo fics at least like 10 times apiece over the past few years, no lie. You're really honestly probably my favorite Repo author EVER). And I want to say that even though this fic is dead, I still give you 10/9 stars on it (;P) and you have my utmost admiration and respect!

Also, I know the chapter titles are song references, but the first time I saw this one I was like, "Why didn't you make it 'Too Shi to Scream'?" the joke was right there! (Sorry, I'm notorious for bad puns and stupid jokes).

See, the tension in this fic physically makes me nervous (don't worry! That's a good thing! It's the mark of a good writer when you can evoke such a genuine reaction in me) but gosh darnit if it doesn't make me mildly uncomfortable, LOL. Seriously, Nathan makes me so uneasy and watching Shilo and Mag dance around him is equally stressful. I'm telling you, all 3 characters are in such a sticky situation that I feel like someone's about to snap...

Like, half of me just wants them to knock it off until they can be 100% sure that Nathan won't interfere, while the other half of me wants them to run away together and be happy immediately and FORCE Nathan to back off. I can't decide which half of me is stronger, but they're definitely both powerful forces. This entire chapter had me shiver in antici...
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Same as before, you write this in such a chilling fashion. One second, we've got that good Shilo/Mag stuff that we're all here for. Next, you've got Nathan and he's either seconds away from snapping (or giving himself jaw problems) or he's genuinely being kind and gentle with Shilo. You really do write his dichotomy well. Like, I'm just struck by the fact that he literally tried to choke out Mag, but when Shilo asks him to let her stay with them, he genuinely softens up because Shilo asks and he manages to sort of agree. It's just so creepy and eerie, but so good too!

(Again, your A/Ns are hilarious! I, too, am a weird panda, and I definitely agree with Nathan's future jaw problems if he isn't more careful, LOL)

Ah! God dang it! This won't be as fluffy or easy to read as any of the other ones, will it?
That was my exact thought the first time I read this fic all those years back. I think you did an excellent job on it, but the introduction to this interpretation of Nathan made me uncomfortable. I mean, that's nothing against you, I was just like "Oh crap, they're in trouble now!" and to see a more violent side of Nathan, though perfectly in-character, was chilling.

Once again, I can't stress enough how awed I am by your talent. Not only are you a great writer, but you flow so well between the sweet, sexy Shilo/Mag moments into much darker, scarier things (like the entire back half of this chapter). I also like how you write Graverobber to be like a knight in (not really) shining armor. It's nice to see him helping Shilo, and showing a kinder side, and interacting with Mag. I won't lie that YOUR fics are what made me like imagining Mag and him as like a BroTP kind of situation, like, you wouldn't expect people like them to get along, but they do.

Long story short, this was another good fic, though the most painful for me because of how scary Nathan is (but again, IMO, you wrote him perfectly well. A bit too dark for my taste, but definitely not OOC)

This is really good dude

I'm so late for this but I love your story, it's amazing!

I know Im a few years late but are you planning to possibly pick this fic back up? Its pretty fantastic.

Oh no! I would love to read more of this! It was wonderful! Like perfectly tied into how the movie was and everything!

I would love for this to be completed but since the last updated was 2012...yeah. But this is amazing and one of my favorite fics.

This is great and I would love to see where it goes, though I realize this story has probably been abandoned given by the amount of time since the last update. Ah well, one can always hope! (love pretty much all your Blind Mag/Shilo stories. Great work!)

Too lazy to log in, so here's an anonymous review :D This is awesome! I hope you update soon, I'm on the edge of my seat! You write their personalities spot on, and I wonder what's going to become of GeneCo in your version?

P.S Mag is the only person who can have no eyes and still look amazing (pun not intended).

Still hating Nathan, still loving Mag/Shi, *huggles Mag* poor thing. Mmmm Shilo actually inheriting GeneCo would be great xD

I really like where you're going with this story,the characters are spot on and consistent. I can't wait to read more of this!

Yaay! Thanks for updating! It's great to see relationships like Shilo/Mag being seen as beautiful like this.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Love

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Yay! Update. Aww Mag and Shilo are so sweet I really hate Nathan grrr. Though I do like how Shilo is licking Mag's wounds and helping her heal. I really love your fics.