I know it’s years later - but yah killing me! How does it end? Please update even if only to say how you wanted it to end. Thank you:)

I want some clarification. Is this Obito pretending to be Madara? Or actual, real legit Madara that's revived from Edo Tensei?

Ouais enfin j'espère qu'elle va le tuer et partir, c'est pas sain comme relation ! It's make me sick!

Asshole, run Mika

Pardoooon ? Ma fierté en a prit un coup aussi ! Je suis indignée !

This is nasty your messed up

I read the whole story, and it is really fascinating! You are a very good writer (:

Isn't there a way for Mika to redeem Madara, he's shown in this story he is not completely heartless and I'd rather not see either one die?

Holy shit, this fanfic is just perfect! 3 I really hope it'll be updated soon. ~

I think you want the story to end the worse way(the saristic way) possible, so all i can tell is ,you have already archiven that,but you could twist it so she would be back at the time, and write so on, in the end it could either be they can love each other or they can die happily.

But you don't seem to want a happy ending so there isn't mutch left to do. And i have read a rewiev, Madara declaring she was a pasttime, this would also be sadistic however it wouldn't fit with the rest of the story, Madara could find other woman, and it would be pointless to end the story that way, you would just waste the story with an episode.

Anyway, the story was great to read and i wish it could have a happy ending, maybe you could write an alternate ending too.

Hey... Yup I do agree midterms are freakin annoying. But you have done such a fine job-nothing to feel sorry about, really. Actually I'm quite a sadist so I would prefer mika's death and madara's victory. Maybe you could also include madara confessing that mika is nothing more than a past time for him. That would totally become a sadistic tragic end:)

Pls make a story about kakashi hanging around water country and finaly growing some balls to ask mei out pls pls pls pls

Imagine without the walls this stir could have gone somewhere else lol jk

I know that I'm slow, but Mika is basically in an abusive relationship with Madara, right?

I died at the bagel and sausage part XD