Reviews for For the First Time
Guest chapter 3 . 3/31/2017
Okay I admit you had me hooked at first, I'm a sucker for a teacher student romance story. But you ruined it for me with the split personality thing. I have known someone who is bipolar and it's very creepy and dangerous and not at all romantic. A nice girl like Daphne deserves better than that don't ya think? Even if he is a good guy overall and somehow overcomes his mental illness Daphne shouldn't have to go through the pain and misery and fear and emotional turmoil that comes with knowing someone like that. so I am sorry to say I won't be continuing what could have been a great fanfic
Guest chapter 9 . 3/9/2017
He lied to her about something, didn't he?
Guest chapter 48 . 12/8/2016
Cheers for Sage!
Amber A. Chase chapter 65 . 5/20/2015
Hi there! I know this was finished three years ago but if youre still there (I didnt check, sorry), I loveloveloved this story. So much. Thanks for the experience
Jay Smith chapter 65 . 3/28/2015
I love it! # msdg ADORABLE!
Katy Smith chapter 3 . 3/25/2015
I don't like Mustardseed's attitude. You should change it!#Mustardseedisnice
lovesreadingandmusic chapter 65 . 9/11/2014
I love your writing! This is totally awesome!
kare-bear-Karen chapter 65 . 9/4/2014
Awesome story!:-)
smartiepants chapter 59 . 6/12/2014
I actually know a 3 year old who has an iphone... ) You had really scared me at first with the Sage thing! I had to reread it a few times to make sure was reading correctly. And then I read your note (-_-) and was so so relieved. Whew! I like Peter Pan too. Sorry Puck! Um... I like you better? P
smartiepants chapter 50 . 6/12/2014
No. Ariana obviously got kidnapped. / But did Mustardseed/Matt/Mr. Firay really die? Bryant just ruined my chances with him! Grr.
Guest chapter 60 . 6/11/2014
Here's my question: Why doesn't Firay just shapeshift into a jaguar or an elephant or a tiger or a venomous snake or something and just kill or severely injure everyone? Also, he can fly. Why doesn't he use that to his advantage. Puck does. And then with the lying thing, he said earlier that it was one of his two powers. If that is the case it must be rather weak to only work on some people and not others. Man, if it was me, I'd turn into a honeybadger because honebadger does what it wants. After that I'd go and raise an army of bees to attack Bryant. I would then turn into a tree as camouflage, pushing Daphne into harms way so that I could go free. After all, you don't have to be fast, just faster than the last guy... gal.
smartiepants chapter 37 . 6/11/2014
That was the funniest thing EVER. Seriously.
yorkie999777000 chapter 59 . 6/11/2014
Daphne: (screams in agony)
Matt: Daphne?! Are you going to harm her.
Bryant: No, I'm not going to harm her, but I-
Matt: Then what's the problem? Sheesh, calling me for nothing... -beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep-
Bryant: O.o Uh, Matt, hello? Hellloooooo? He hung up on me!?
James: Wait, so she's stuck with us?
(Bryant and James turn to Daphne)
Daphne: Hmm, okay! Hey, I wonder how long I can whistle a single note before I can't hear it anymore? WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooo
smartiepants chapter 16 . 6/11/2014
Mustard is in there isn't he? Crap. Crap crap crap.
smartiepants chapter 13 . 6/11/2014
Wendell has a crush on Daphne. Am I right? Am I right? I think I'm right. P
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