Reviews for For the First Time |
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![]() ![]() Okay I admit you had me hooked at first, I'm a sucker for a teacher student romance story. But you ruined it for me with the split personality thing. I have known someone who is bipolar and it's very creepy and dangerous and not at all romantic. A nice girl like Daphne deserves better than that don't ya think? Even if he is a good guy overall and somehow overcomes his mental illness Daphne shouldn't have to go through the pain and misery and fear and emotional turmoil that comes with knowing someone like that. so I am sorry to say I won't be continuing what could have been a great fanfic |
![]() ![]() He lied to her about something, didn't he? |
![]() ![]() Cheers for Sage! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi there! I know this was finished three years ago but if youre still there (I didnt check, sorry), I loveloveloved this story. So much. Thanks for the experience |
![]() ![]() I love it! # msdg ADORABLE! |
![]() ![]() I don't like Mustardseed's attitude. You should change it!#Mustardseedisnice |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your writing! This is totally awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story!:-) |
![]() ![]() I actually know a 3 year old who has an iphone... ) You had really scared me at first with the Sage thing! I had to reread it a few times to make sure was reading correctly. And then I read your note (-_-) and was so so relieved. Whew! I like Peter Pan too. Sorry Puck! Um... I like you better? P |
![]() ![]() No. Ariana obviously got kidnapped. / But did Mustardseed/Matt/Mr. Firay really die? Bryant just ruined my chances with him! Grr. |
![]() ![]() Here's my question: Why doesn't Firay just shapeshift into a jaguar or an elephant or a tiger or a venomous snake or something and just kill or severely injure everyone? Also, he can fly. Why doesn't he use that to his advantage. Puck does. And then with the lying thing, he said earlier that it was one of his two powers. If that is the case it must be rather weak to only work on some people and not others. Man, if it was me, I'd turn into a honeybadger because honebadger does what it wants. After that I'd go and raise an army of bees to attack Bryant. I would then turn into a tree as camouflage, pushing Daphne into harms way so that I could go free. After all, you don't have to be fast, just faster than the last guy... gal. |
![]() ![]() That was the funniest thing EVER. Seriously. |
![]() ![]() Daphne: (screams in agony) Matt: Daphne?! Are you going to harm her. Bryant: No, I'm not going to harm her, but I- Matt: Then what's the problem? Sheesh, calling me for nothing... -beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep- Bryant: O.o Uh, Matt, hello? Hellloooooo? He hung up on me!? James: Wait, so she's stuck with us? (Bryant and James turn to Daphne) Daphne: Hmm, okay! Hey, I wonder how long I can whistle a single note before I can't hear it anymore? WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooo |
![]() ![]() Mustard is in there isn't he? Crap. Crap crap crap. |
![]() ![]() Wendell has a crush on Daphne. Am I right? Am I right? I think I'm right. P |