I LOVED IT! The way that the characters act, the way you portrayed them while they were smutting, it all felt almost real! And at the end where America was like:
"So...can I have my glasses back?" Was hilarious!

This was written well, but we really need to work on the consent issues here, it bordered on rape for a while. I see this kind of thing too often in UkUS fanfiction, they can have sex without it being so wrong. England topping does not have to mean that he is being a creep!

Amazing :')

Holy shit, you must have been researching quite a lot because this was an AMAZING first! Good job, I really enjoyed it.

That was way too good to be your first. Imagine how they'll be in the future. :D

You did a pretty great job writing this.

For your first lemon that was bloody sexy, love.

I could not tell at all that this was your first written lemon. Honestly, I love when America calls England a "sex-hungry pirate". Brill ;)
~Em :)

Perverted Arthur omg! 3

Omg, I do not believe this is your FIRST lemon. It's freaking goood. *nosebleeds*

Woah, that was only your first? Hory sheet, that's awesome! Amazing job!

That I must say was awesome for your first lemon! Dude congrats! I solemnly welcome you to the kingdom of perverts where I the queen of Pervertedness shall keep you safe from the weirdos who live among us, as we freely and happily dirty the pure

Wonderful job you just did amazing. I absolutely 3 this fanfiction.

I love uke america it is so hard to find stuff like this. Plus good job.

As a yaoi fangirl, I am surprised tha was your first lemon. Well done :) the actual lemony bit was aces, but I felt the ice cream bit leading up to it needed a bit of work. It didn't flow as well as the sex did.