XD amazingly hilarious

Make more plz continue! I wanna see Julius & Alice as Tweens but they ruined 5 year old Alice's innocence I still have some of mine & I'm 15! But make more I loved it! XD

This was cute! I like Alice-chan. :)

This was hilarious! I loved this story soo much! I'm gonna have to read your sequel now. Awesome job! :)

It's not really scarring I suppose since she really isn't 5 but the thing is POOR ELLIOT! IT WAS YOU LITTLE SHITS WASN'T IT (points at Dee and Dum)

Is there a sequel?

0-0 omg

Possibly the funniest fanfiction I have ever read. You should try doing another one where a role holder gets turned into a 5 year old like Boris :0 then you can have him stay with Alice 3 actually it'd be pretty cute with Peter too cause he could turn into a rabbit..

this story actually had me laughing out loud

I always wonder why the cheshire cat was afraid of the rides. When I saw the original walt disney alice in wonderland movie , that cat always scared the hell out of me in my childhood. I 'm really curious to know what Pierce have done before Alice come... Merry go round jokes ! XD Now , blood is going to nickname him Mary oba-chan.

My god , theses three fighting over what Alice learning. This one was funny!

It's was a sweet chapter! Awww Julius stop being meanie and hug Alice at the very beginning.

I feel so sad for Elliot . I know that theses twins will do something bad at the end. Just seeing Gray fainting was like ROFL . He didn't though that she going to use the word "rape" !

ROFL , Blood was already fine to take a bath with a five years old little girl that he even put her shampoo on her hair. Then he tell what did she saw from Elliot. Poor him, but still I wouldn't have thought that the head of hatter will get so inpatient and tell her something inappropriate for her age.
I had the same face when the twins and Alice was like 0.0 , I mean WOW! The twins are sweet at the end.

Gray is the best over-protective father at this story. OMG , bad idea taking a little girl at Blood bathhouse... I don't why but something will happens ...These twins with their evil idea.