Youre telling me this guy trains for 200 years and he cant fucking wafflestomp neji and the. Gaara

to fucking fast in progression of the story chang it for a better fiction

change romance to humor lmao

You are weird

This is terrible, you make Naruto so strong and yet he has to enter sage mode to beat Neji. Not only that but he still spams jutsu like he does kage bunshins in canon. Overall this story is terrible, I couldn't even finish it.

ook you're REALLY stretching the timeline as Mei was nothing more than a Jonin at most when Minato an Kushina died so basically you're setting the story so Naruto was born 15 years later than he was lol

178 years of training and yet Naruto is still a weakling who spams different ninjitsu techniques instead of shadow clones and still has a mind of a child...

I really like this but could you send me a pm of who is going to be in the harem plz because I thought that Kisara was going to be in it. I got confused.

Well this is an interesting chapter but one question is Kisara with Naruto or not just want have that cleared up for me so keep up the good work and update soon.

This story started making less and less sense with the addition of the 'brother'. I mean really Kisara is supposedly suppose to love Naruto but then goes flirting with his brother? Then Naruto catching him having Kisara chained up naked and he just goes on about his business when he supposedly loves her in return? Are you kidding me? None of that makes any sense.

Your story is all flash and no substance. You have made your characters so one dimensional it's laughable. Every "powerful" female character has been turned into a pathetic simpering slave to serve some sort of fetish. I can't even make it any further into this schlock.

are all the female sages in the harem aswell and is narutos brother a summan

Are Karin and Guren his presents or his fiancees?
Also the chapter is short.

more chapters pls

Awesome!