Reviews for Birthday Wish
cutepokegirl chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
Good. Its good
Johnshyver9684 chapter 2 . 12/21/2014
Soo f$& ing good
ZekeHerald chapter 2 . 5/26/2014
WOAHHH- *KO'ED*
PokeSpeBanette chapter 2 . 3/26/2014
you doing anymore besides the two...three you got now? i'd love to see soem more originalshipping mate, it's rare to see anyone who likes green as the uke like i do
KnightofBlood01 chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
sorry cant read...dont like
BlueAngelFox chapter 2 . 7/28/2013
Good. May be very lemony.. But its pretty good overall :)
pokemaster101 chapter 2 . 9/4/2012
The ending made me laugh. XD

Keep it up! 8DDDDD
KHYAOILOVER772 chapter 2 . 8/21/2012
*nosebleeds* XD
PoKaBu-ChAn chapter 2 . 4/3/2012
I ...LOVED THIS XDD YOU DID GREAT
PoKaBu-ChAn chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
its so cute! i love the way green wears a dress XDDD
KawaiiKitty11 chapter 2 . 2/19/2012
You're first lemon, huh? NICE! I freakin loved this XD oh, and the French thing made me squeal like a total fangirl (which I am XD) This so deserves more reviews than it has!
MintClover chapter 2 . 12/30/2011
Eevee ears! xD awesome story!
Divadcreator chapter 2 . 8/20/2011
Kyyyaa XD I feel so pervy! but still I love it! w best birthday present for Red and Hell Green loved it too
FeraNelia chapter 2 . 8/17/2011
Mm-m~ That was good, especially for your first lemon! I liked how you wrote both characters. Though perhaps you could have described a bit more; for example, I wondered, when did Red take his own clothing off? But aside from that I enjoyed it and I really hope to see more from you soon~ :)
FeraNelia chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
Green in a dress made my day so hard *laughs* And don't worry about OOC-ness, they were actually quite IC (And what would fanfictions be if characters were always perfectly IC? That's right, quite boring!~) I really liked this, and I hope you'll write more, 5 reviews or not~

P.S I prefer dominant!Red too, so of course I'm eager to see more~
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