Reviews for The Half Night King |
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![]() ![]() There should be more chapters to this story than 8 chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() they should have sent a message for backup, but that's just my opinion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() pity this is a great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Also the sudden change in chakra would fuck up her control |
![]() ![]() ![]() There’s no way Sakura can use shadow clones after tripling her chakra when sasuke who has an abnormal amount of charka at his age can’t... that just doesn’t make sense... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can you make more of those fanfiction please |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was good its to bad you gave and quit! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story so far. However, your decision not to make it a harem is a mistake especially since it has the potential to be one. While, I agree that pairing him with the kyuubi is the correct choice, I also believe that with the kyuubi he should also be paired with anko along with two other women preferably badasses like tsunade and mei. A badass like Naruto needs more than one equally badass woman. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww |
![]() ![]() ![]() do not rewrite this its good as is keep this going I need to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continue the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bro plz continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shame that you gave up on the story. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Don't want to sound harsh but that was the most cliché and cringe filled chapter I have read ever. I hope it somehow gets better. Sorry if I sound like an ass. |