Reviews for Marching Forward
Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
This universe certainly has an interesting air about it. Trade technology with magic? Why not both? XD I'm sure Shishio's just being his selfish again and wants to hoard.

I love the AK history. It's always nice to have friends in high places.. or in the shadows. Where ever is more convenient. That was a fun read! :)
JERUSALEM's Bride chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
yyyyyyyyyoooooooouuuuuuuu ssshhouuulllddd !
masoxrista chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
I cannot believe for the life of me why this hasn't been updated... Such a great start. You must absolutely MUST update. Please? I've been dying for a fic with exactly this blend of techie X magic X action fusion.
sing-to-the-moon chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
loving it. i look forward to the following chapters.
eternita chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
This is so promising, I can't wait to read more. Please, update soon.
TexasDreamer01 chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
Wow.

Aside from one more good once-over, this is great. I imagine that this is going to flow pretty smoothly, since you set up everyone in such a way that it wouldn't be hard to keep them in character.

Aoshi and Kaoru don't look any more like potential lovers than Yahiko and Misao, and I wonder who that Shikijo is. Red hair? That wouldn't happen to be an alias for Kenshin, would it? Or is he a random redhead?

I look forward to the next chapters,

brittney
bonghi chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
I like stories about Kaoru that has magic. Can't wait for Kenshin to appear. This story is well written and promises a lot of fun. Please, update soon.
Fireotaku18 chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
I really Really REALLY LIKE! Cannot wait to find out what happens next!
None233901 chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
Interesting. I like the personality Aoshi is 'trying' to contain. It's cute. And I love the character development of Kaoru. Keep up the good work!
kokoronagomu chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
i really like this! i like the world, the setting -it's all great!

welcome to fan fiction \o/

delighted,

ginny

kokoronagomu. deviantart. com

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Gothic Lust chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
This is interesting. I like it. Please update again soon! :D
deliriou599 chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
Fantastic! You write so well! I loved the surprise that Aoshi knew her! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Andie Andreas chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
Really liked the first chapter. Please update soon! :)
LittleDragon5 chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Cute! I always enjoy a B/A Kaoru story. And yes, you do leave it wonderfully open for a good Aoshi/Kaoru story, you have then with such a brother/sister vibe at the moment that it shouldn't be hard to introduce Kenshin.
HD chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
This is great!
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