Reviews for Marching Forward |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This universe certainly has an interesting air about it. Trade technology with magic? Why not both? XD I'm sure Shishio's just being his selfish again and wants to hoard. I love the AK history. It's always nice to have friends in high places.. or in the shadows. Where ever is more convenient. That was a fun read! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() yyyyyyyyyoooooooouuuuuuuu ssshhouuulllddd ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cannot believe for the life of me why this hasn't been updated... Such a great start. You must absolutely MUST update. Please? I've been dying for a fic with exactly this blend of techie X magic X action fusion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() loving it. i look forward to the following chapters. |
![]() ![]() This is so promising, I can't wait to read more. Please, update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Aside from one more good once-over, this is great. I imagine that this is going to flow pretty smoothly, since you set up everyone in such a way that it wouldn't be hard to keep them in character. Aoshi and Kaoru don't look any more like potential lovers than Yahiko and Misao, and I wonder who that Shikijo is. Red hair? That wouldn't happen to be an alias for Kenshin, would it? Or is he a random redhead? I look forward to the next chapters, brittney |
![]() ![]() I like stories about Kaoru that has magic. Can't wait for Kenshin to appear. This story is well written and promises a lot of fun. Please, update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really Really REALLY LIKE! Cannot wait to find out what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. I like the personality Aoshi is 'trying' to contain. It's cute. And I love the character development of Kaoru. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like this! i like the world, the setting -it's all great! welcome to fan fiction \o/ delighted, ginny kokoronagomu. deviantart. com ټ |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is interesting. I like it. Please update again soon! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic! You write so well! I loved the surprise that Aoshi knew her! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really liked the first chapter. Please update soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute! I always enjoy a B/A Kaoru story. And yes, you do leave it wonderfully open for a good Aoshi/Kaoru story, you have then with such a brother/sister vibe at the moment that it shouldn't be hard to introduce Kenshin. |
![]() ![]() This is great! |