Omg I loved this! It was amazing!

:) ;) :3 ;3 :D ;D

Oh damn. Way too go. That's how you dare someone Sasuke.

This was so beautiful!

nice

:)

That was very well done, and I loved Naruto and Sasuke horse playing on the playground. Childish antics by grown men are always endearing. And your writing is, as usual, fantastic. The story flowed smoothly, and their make-out session was very hot. My one qualm is that, if Naruto was late because of a speculated girlfriend, him going to town with Sasuke's body is a little of a... "eeeh Naruto, that's technically cheating, break up with her first, man." Which could have been cleared up with a single sentence, so it's really no big deal and I will pretend that he was late due to some other reason like... having missed his bus or something. haha Also, Sasuke being a virgin is hilarious and very much in character. The boy is definitely asexual to most people. Thank you for writing this. It made my day.

YES! Yaoi, and humour, and awesome-writing-skillz all rolled into one! Love your work!

I like this. Their banter flows well and is pretty entertaining to read. I also like how you actually mentioned Sasuke's (in)experience instead of having him be some sex god on the first go. People try to do that too often, and it's just unrealistic. Great job. :)

As of late, I really haven't been able to like SasuNaru/NaruSasu lemons. Although I believe with ever fiber of my being that they are madly, uncontrollably in love with each other, I don't see their relationship as a sexual one.

BUT, this was excellent. I love that you used words that aren't typically used. The ending is especially great, haha. Definitely one of the few sex/foreplay scenes that I liked.

aww this whas so sweet and hot relly lovly story

omg omg omg I LOVE IT! It was amazing when Naruto kissed Sasuke the second time!

"Mouths aren't only for kissing, Sasuke" -Naruto

BEST FUCKING LINE EVERRRRRRRRRR XD

AAAAWWeee This is soooo sweet

Absolutely love it.

Thanx

That was awesome,I loved it and excellent job