I know you said your muse was not present, but I thought you really wrote the stories well that you thought weren't great. Very creative and thoughtful! Well done indeed!

Gah, please please finish! Love the story so far! :)

Please write more. I've really enjoyed this.

This is far and away the best fanfic I've read that has Cpt Jack's reaction to River. It's well done and thought through. Lovely.

Wordy, but absolutely amazing. This was so good!

Awesome!

"He pouted and wrapped his arms in front of his chest, giving the book a little kick to get it further away as if it had offended him."

I can so see that! I can see him being exactly like that when he gets pouty and little boy irritable. :D

"Oh, and the best part is that this diary is bigger on the inside! It will never run out of pages, no matter how often you write in it!"

Now I really like that idea!

"Top of your class, River Song. Excellent marks. However, there are some behavioral problems that will have to be noted on your permanent record."

Howl with laughter! So true!

I enjoyed this chapter but i really cant picture any other face other than alex kingston as River Song so i'm glad her face is back (in a manner) Looking forward to the next chapter :P

Brilliant and emotional :)

Young River, lovely! And now she's regenerated into the River the Doctor knows. Looking forward to the sexy times in the next chapter!

Brilliant! River and Jack just *need* to meet sometime.

wow! this chpater was sooooo good :) can you make more like this that are flirty and fluffy and stuff? i think you captured river really good.

GREAT!

This fic makes me giggle. Heeheehee. I want them to meet EXACTLY like this! :3

Just want to thank everyone again for the kind words and for following me on this. Chapter 2 was based on the following photo prompt: .

Now you tell me if you were them, and came home to find that, that you wouldn't be thinking what they were thinking! ;-)