This was so very lovely and very well written. These two are a favorite couple of mine and to have you write them so wonderfully together as you did just makes me all sorts of happy.

Oh my goodness! I loved your story! It was just the right amount of everything! And then the line at the end! I loved it, keep it up darlin'

That was simply amazing. I loved the ending, again amazing.
Like I said before in another Fic of yours I love how you write and people should really look into you.

You have brilliant ideas, and you put a lot of thought into your work and I can tell. This is great! Keep up your brilliance!

Wondeful story! Your descriptions are a perfect balance between detail and progression. I loved how you made it sexy, funny, and sad all at once.
Very well done! :)

I absolutely adored this one shot. It was lovely.

Sprinkles

Perfect! I think this is a great story! You have great talent. Good emotion, smexiness, and writing!

Good work!

DMK

Wow I really enjoyed this story and am sad its over I would love it if you thought about making a part two. I just love the way you put this together and I think you could write an amazing second half. well think about it and thank you so much for this one :)

Hello i'm french. I would you say, your one-shot is very good, i like it YAOI-POWA ! Eric and Alan is a very cute pairing, kawaii, ...very good !

Sayonara

PS : I'm sorry for the orthograph, i'm not very good in english, sorry. ( Do you understand ') ?

I loved this. It's all I have to say. I loved this. New fave story~ oh and I'm also writing a story dedicated to Alan Slingby

Just wonderful. It felt so organic, not rushed into lemon or anything. Beautifully balanced, well done

Eric's love for Alan is clearly deep... you've portrayed it amazingly well :) The ending was a mixed one too, but the last line I really liked.

Overall, a really great oneshot! It deserves to be added as one of my favourite stories (not that I'm that special or anything).

Awww! Just... Just... Awww! That was beautiful! A much welcomed change from some of your darker stories(not that I don't love those) :)

Simply bittersweet like dark chocolate... and hot yaoi that I could glue my eyes too all day. ;) Lovely story!

Oh wow. This is, by far, the BEST Alan and Eric fanfic I have ever read. They are my favorite pairing and you wrote them so well. I am...at a loss for words...I absolutely love it. Write this pairing more often! The story was beautiful! Love it!