omg this story gave me massive feels. i love alma wade, never been a fan of bekket tbh. but this story was done very well.

whens the sequel and whats the name of it

We need more... WAY MORE. Like right now at this moment sweetheart, can you do that for us? Thanks we would love if you did that. This was beautiful I mean just... beautiful.

More please more! I'm love with this Fanfiction! MICHEALxALMA

nice.

to cheast for the f.e.a.r game but good anyways, could have done withought the sex scene but whatever

I liked this story a lot. I only wished you went in to more detail about what happened between the ending of FEAR 2 to your first chapter. It would be interesting to read about Alma and Becket's encounters before he submitted to her.

u made my dreams come true with this lemon a actual fully detailed lemon of alma bout fuckin time 1 was made GREAT JOB MAN :D oh and i didnt find anything twisted about it at all i was expecting tenticle rape when i saw twisted XD and i rly hope u make that sequel to this hopefully with multiple endings also ;) lol well im out PCE

"But I think my last name should change, Michael Wade sounds pretty awesome."

LMAO. Becket, you made my century with that line.

Yep thats one hell of a good fucken stoy u got there ! I hope u do make a sequal or atleast another FEAR story , thanx for the excellent read ! ... Oh and on a more secrect note I did catch a little " wood " reading this so thanx for that to. ;D

Beautiful story.

You know, the games never actually said who was the father of the Point Man and Fettel, so this story passes. :D

Great story dude.

Couple timeline issues though, unless you're going with an alternate past. Cuz Beckett didn't gain his physic abilities young. He was manufactured to be physic abilities by Aristride. Also, Alma was in the vault when she was young and I believe dead by 14, it was either that or 18 but if you were going for alt timeline then great job. :)

Wow! I really, really like this. God, please write more. I love it! (hehe)

Aww, I like how Alma is, and Becket is done really well.

I was a bit surprised by how much speech Alma got, because when I picture her, I can't really see her saying much, but she is done so well in this.

ANd ALisha sounds so adorable

Hey there dude so glad to see a new story from you!

Now let's discuss this story story. As far as I'm concerned it fits perfectly well in the F.E.A.R. universe. It actually felt like I was playing this and it happened after the events of Project Origin.

Can't wait for the Alma/Michael lemon in the next chapter. I have not read a fic where she and Michael had an erotic encounter bebore but I like seeing something new and Michael haveing emotional conflict with her. Once again, I can't wait for the lemon. As long as it's consensual sex and not another rape. Because I don't want to see the guy being raped TWICE :O

Uh..sorry for the short review. Please update as soon as possible :D

good chapter did u make this for a fanaly sry im sure i misspelled anyway did u make this to finish off that other story i found alot of similarities and i think im gonna have ta look for that lemon u promised i just hope u make em do more then just them fucking make em expirement u know what i mean like oral and anal sex i mean u dont have to but im just tired of ppl only doin that when they make a lemon that has alma in it spice it up a lil well anyway im off good chapter