Reviews for How It Should Be
HermioneSnape1983 chapter 2 . 10/5/2018
What no kiss goodbye?
HermioneSnape1983 chapter 1 . 10/5/2018
But Severus knows she back as he saw them in the entrance hall and the headmaster knows this
HermioneSnape1983 chapter 1 . 10/5/2018
Why did she leave Severus?
guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2017
The plot is too wishy-washy and the fact that she just openly says ,"this is our daughter"? If she hadn't told him about the kid in 7 years she wouldn't have been so open about it now or at least not ambush him with the information through a chance meeting in a random hallway. I don't want to continue reading because the reveal should be one of the major points and you dropped the ball.
GurlNextDoor447 chapter 26 . 1/15/2015
Is there a sequel? Is there going to be? I would love to see a relationship happen or progress between Vienna and Draco! It would be SOOO cute! And Archie and Lily would be adorable too! I loved this story and would love to read more. (I also read Unexpected Feeling and it was super good too!). :)
QOP chapter 27 . 7/31/2014
it's a pity I didn't find your story HOW IT TURNED OUT.
Dagger-Seishin chapter 26 . 5/26/2014
i know ive read this one before id jsut forgotten about it and coudl enver find ti when i wanted.
good story very well done.
pumpkin314159 chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
Um very confused at the end. You contradict yourself when you say Vienna's father died and moments later he appears.
Fullofpassion09 chapter 6 . 11/21/2012
He proposed before he broke off his six year relationship?! Hmmm even if I planned on leaving him I'd send a couple hexes his way!
Jammiedodger15 chapter 26 . 7/8/2012
Aww i enjoyed this story, so cute! :-D
Dagger-Seishin chapter 27 . 3/17/2012
i really liked this story. well done! veyr very cute :):)
Alexa1993 chapter 26 . 12/30/2011
SeverusSnape'sLove chapter 26 . 8/27/2011
I really enjoyed this story. :)
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 26 . 8/21/2011
nice one
KayDee-DesignerExtraordinare chapter 26 . 8/18/2011
This was an absolutely perfect story. I loved every bit of it, and I can't wait to read the sequel. You're awesome. Holla!

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