Reviews for How It Should Be |
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HermioneSnape1983 chapter 2 . 10/5/2018 What no kiss goodbye? |
HermioneSnape1983 chapter 1 . 10/5/2018 But Severus knows she back as he saw them in the entrance hall and the headmaster knows this |
HermioneSnape1983 chapter 1 . 10/5/2018 Why did she leave Severus? |
guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2017 The plot is too wishy-washy and the fact that she just openly says ,"this is our daughter"? If she hadn't told him about the kid in 7 years she wouldn't have been so open about it now or at least not ambush him with the information through a chance meeting in a random hallway. I don't want to continue reading because the reveal should be one of the major points and you dropped the ball. |
GurlNextDoor447 chapter 26 . 1/15/2015 Is there a sequel? Is there going to be? I would love to see a relationship happen or progress between Vienna and Draco! It would be SOOO cute! And Archie and Lily would be adorable too! I loved this story and would love to read more. (I also read Unexpected Feeling and it was super good too!). :) |
QOP chapter 27 . 7/31/2014 it's a pity I didn't find your story HOW IT TURNED OUT. |
Dagger-Seishin chapter 26 . 5/26/2014 i know ive read this one before id jsut forgotten about it and coudl enver find ti when i wanted. good story very well done. |
pumpkin314159 chapter 1 . 3/13/2013 Um very confused at the end. You contradict yourself when you say Vienna's father died and moments later he appears. |
Fullofpassion09 chapter 6 . 11/21/2012 He proposed before he broke off his six year relationship?! Hmmm even if I planned on leaving him I'd send a couple hexes his way! |
Jammiedodger15 chapter 26 . 7/8/2012 Aww i enjoyed this story, so cute! :-D |
Dagger-Seishin chapter 27 . 3/17/2012 i really liked this story. well done! veyr very cute :):) |
Alexa1993 chapter 26 . 12/30/2011 |
SeverusSnape'sLove chapter 26 . 8/27/2011 I really enjoyed this story. :) |
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 26 . 8/21/2011 nice one |
KayDee-DesignerExtraordinare chapter 26 . 8/18/2011 This was an absolutely perfect story. I loved every bit of it, and I can't wait to read the sequel. You're awesome. Holla! xXKodyXx |