Absolutely loved it! So intense from start to finish. Glad that Giseppe was able to be Father in the end and do the right thing.

I loved the story, I just wish there was more to it, like more chapters and more detail on certain parts. I would have liked to see the outside POV of the world around them like Caroline's POV along with Bonnie's the two kind of disappeared. And I would have liked to see an interaction between Damon, Stefan, Katherine and Elena at the end. And have the four of them interact and go through that part of the emotional baggage. And fully complete the story on all bases of the emotional uphill or downhill the characters had gone through. And Damon never really learned what happened with Elena's past and her family. Miranda just mentioned that Jeremy was dead and he assumed the rest when he walked around her room. I feel like there was more to tell here but your writing was very compelling and many times through the story did I feel an emotional response to what you were saying and I admit I might have teared up here and there but nothing big. And above all... I wish it was a real book and had lasted longer. It was truly an amazing story. Thank you!

it’s good

There are a few well-written AU Delena stories out there and yours rather stands out because of the fascinating mystery element, which I love.

this is beautiful written ! lot of emotions and beauty ! damon was perfect in the equation and ur elena was perfect i usually dont like how people portray her but u did it greatly !

Loved it!

Thank you so much for finishing the story... no matter how long it took I realized that the writers on fanfic don't get paid, and that you have stories that do pay you, so no real motivation to finish them... other than the fact that your creation is left u finished, like a lump of clay halfway to becoming a bowl, and as an artist, I know that feeling well I also understand the fickle Ness of the muse, and the very elusiveness of her more importantly! Non creative people have no experience with that and, frankly, don't get it.. I'm so glad you pushed through and eventually overcame the writers block lastly, I know how real life gets in the way of every artists struggle to let out the creativity in whatever form, even when "musie" is actually cooperating! Don't apoligize, you should be proud of this. I'm sad about the dearth of good Delena on TVD And now Nike a is gone and we are left grasping at breadcrumbs! I loved your story! Enjoy doing of my story! Lol!

loved this sweet story!

i really like the way this is written

Incredible and amazing story...

That was the best chapter what will damon father say when he finds out

Great story

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this was a really nice story, I read it all through:-) you're a very talented writer, I hope to see one of your books on the shelf, I promise I'll be sure to buy it:DD

Thanks so much for this. It was great. I hope you're still writing.