Reviews for Define Manpile
Guest chapter 1 . 1/11
I cried inside at the pureness of this amazingly well-written fic... gods bless whoever made this treasure T~T
Sakihinata chapter 1 . 12/27/2019
Awesome ;)
EdeatheDemonFox chapter 1 . 10/25/2015
God, Cloud is in one sexy manpile now! Holy fuck, this was HOT. Even though what Zack did was so mean to Cloud, he's also right. If it wasn't for his lie, Cloud would not have ended up in said manpile!
Lyumia chapter 1 . 6/20/2015
I love how all this happened due to the unconventional remodeling of toilets.
Anyways it was a great read, so kudos.
Blue Line chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
This is absolutely adorable!
I remember when I read this fanfiction for the first time, I wasn't very good (at all) in english so when Sephiroth said "I call the second" I was thinking : what? Calling who? What second? Zack? Omg I don't understand but it's sweet. Oh my god and when Cloud said : "I can't dance" I did not understood this part at all like :WHY WOULD HE BE DANCING?
Now that I understand this in it's totality it's totally different (and obviously better. It makes more sense, herm...).
I'm actually pretty sorry that I did not reviewed one of your fanfictions before, but I'm doing it now. Your fanfictions are amazing. Really!
Sorry, I'm talking too much I'll stop now!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
I love it
Bubblegumhairedmonster chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Ha. Manpile. I'll show you a manpi-

...Thanks...That's what I REALLY meant to say.

"Music is like water. It is something that must flow."
MT36
Quiz King chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
Wow this was so great to read! I loved it waaaay too much, and I'd like to thank you for writing it in the first place! I feel like dramatically gripping at my heart and melting into a big puddle of goo.

Urk, it doesn't help that I'm relpaying Crisis Core. jesus all these feels are gonna give em a heart attack on day! I just know I'm going to freak just the tiniest bit more than usual when I get farther in the game again.

But yeah, awesome story! I hope you write another of this pairing, or even maybe a Genesis/Cloud? I like that one in particular, and it seems that there's really not many out there that I'd like to read XDD
Russian Prince Kai Hiwatari chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
cuuuute. 3 Honestly, that would be an amazing birthday in my mind too. Lucky Chocobo. XD.
Alice Hell chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
This is amazing urgh :) Thanks.
spiel chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
"Ilikeyou," Angeal blurted finally, rising abruptly and moving toward the kitchen. "And I'm getting the cake."

I could so perfectly visualize this scene in my head! You had me cracking up in my seat here
1sunfun chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
Nice.
dragonzice chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
Aww, this was adorable. Angeal was especially adorable. Haha, I loved his reactions to Cloud.
MelanisticLeopard chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
WOW. IT'S SO LONG. That was awesome. X'D It's epically long-especially for a oneshot! VnV Was it hard to collab? IT SEEMS HARD. But I really liked your Angeal, you seemed to hit the nail on the head with him. The frowny face is so him. ;) He was really great-you embraced the fandom version. Awesome. Zack so got yelled at like a child. THAT MADE ME SNICKER. THIS IS WHAT IMMATURITY DOES TO YOU. Of course I absolutely love Zack & all his immature, puppy-esque ways, but that wasn't nice. & RENO. Yes. He would be involved, wouldn't he? He's always involved. He's like, a staple of the prank.
Imina chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
A gorgeous story! Thanks for sharing. It's always fantastic to find a writer that, well, writes, this pairing really well. You have me hooked!
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