This is excellent. The relationship between these two in the books plays very nicely on screen and I like how you've expanded on it here. It's clever and not at all cloying, good stuff!

This was so perfect and subtle... makes me love Jorah even more. Ive only seen the show but this was a perfect 'in his head' piece and I think you nailed it. Thanks for creating it and sharing!

This is wonderfully written, and exactly what I wanted out of a Jorah/Daenerys fic. Your descriptions are full of emotion, and spot on for Jorah, without ever being obvious or trite. I would love to see you write more of these two.

Fantastic story! I love Dany and Jorah! I hope you write more about my favorite characters.

This is wonderfully written, and exactly what I wanted out of a Jorah/Daenerys fic. Your descriptions are full of emotion, and spot on for Jorah, without ever being obvious or trite. I would love to see you write more of these two.

great fic!

I love these two characters in HBO's Game of Thrones, especially Ser Jorah Mormont. I'm so happy to see a fanfic about them. A great start - I look forward to reading more!

Amazing. I really liked the characterization. :) You should do more of these two! My only qualm would have been an incongruity in the timeline which Jorah confessed she looked like his wife, but other than that, this was awesome and a joy to read!