WHY COULDN'T THEY JUST BE HAPPY? IM SO UPSET.

WHAT? O.O
Gah! I’m glad I read this in a way, but man.. that ending will mess with my brain for the next couple days, I know it will.

I do thank you for taking the time to write this story!

Is a nice fic, a unnusual plot. So a good work.
But.. like it could be more, much more.
Draco...only a few glimpses of him. Sev and Lucius show emotions, love.

And the end... it don't feel rigth.

OMG I LOVE AND HATE IT, love the fic itself but hate the end because of Hermione!
Love it more though!

Amazing story. You made me cry multiple times.

I really love this story and I'm sad to see it end, though I'll read the sequel if it's up (probaly), though I still have to admit that a bigger part of me is wishing for it to be under fifteen chapter -like what you've already posted for the other part being fifteen chapters- or for you to not have written it let so I can just appreciate this masterpiece and let it drift in the endless hole of my bookmarks. (Sweatdrops.)

But, anyway, support to the author and keep up the good work!

P. S. I hope that the stoy can have a happy ending and that Harry and Voldemort end up together at the end or at least both being happy while Harry's in the afterlife or visa versa.

Anyway, bye, thank you so much, May Your Muse Be Forever With You! Keep up the good work, please!

I love theway the story's going! Finally punching some more plot in there and focusing on the emotional/depper realtionship part! Amazingly, even the Dom/Sub parts seem even more than bareable; I kind of like them now that I've seen the way that it works into the story, though I still hate the part at the beginning -the beginning of the Dom/Sub part- were Harry was just super submissive.

But I still love it, so, no hard feelings? (Smiles sheepishly.)

Anyway, bye!

:P

I love this story but the Master/Pet thing is making me edgy...I just hate a submissive Harry that loses any will of his own.

I mean,it's not that bad, but I hate Harry that's not fighting back and willing to stand up to Voldemort and actaully have a pair of balls of his own. The Master/Pet thing is fine and all in the bedroom or even in the bedroom -if there's something Harry really doesn't want to do, he won't do it-, but outside he's an independent person.

Anyway, sorry for the mini rant! Keep up the good work!

(Is sooooooo happy!)

:)

I love you!

It's just -everything! Everything about this story is absoultley perfect! I just love everything about it!

I'm so sorry that I cannot give you the review that this absoultley wounderful, masterpiece of literature deserves, but I hope that until you obtain such a review -from myself or others- that you will be content with my rambling.

Anyway, thank you so much for such a great story, please keep up the good work, and have a wounderful weekend!

:)

(fr/FR)

I'm so confused by this story but in a way I understood the complexity of it and I loved it
Keep on the writes

Holy SHIT, WHAT?! *dies*

Onyx: Er - great writing... If totally heart-wrenching... erm... I'm gonna go kill a mudblood... Ciao.

Ok, I will say it frankly, this story was sometimes just... stupit. I realy enjoyed first half but the other half... no comments here. I was sniggering all the time when I was reading about Voldemort playing to Harry's killings. It was like watching very bad movie and wanting just slap himself in the face. Odly, at times I like reading sub/dom relationship, but unfortunately even for one moment I didin't buy your version of sub/dom. Harry had a family which was beating him, so he will not appretiate that he have abuser in his life again. I understand that for some people pain is arousing, but only when it's just a play. And what we have in this story? Voldemort is mad at Harry just for stupid things, so he must punish him. And what Harry did? Harry was apologising him every time and love him much more *I roll my eyes*. Voldemort is just like the Dursleys and Harry should simply kick his arse.

Ok, I will stop my ranting here. Beside that, I want only to say that you don't use punctation at all. A lot of times it was hard for me to understand what you are writting. And grammar is really bad. English isn't my native language, so I also do a lot of miatakes, but even I was able to see misspellings and other stuff. I even wondering, if you aren't English and just writting in english because you can gain more readers.

Arwenien.

Really liked it. But I found it sad that this story didn't have a happy ending.

Hn, your story is really sad. I can't picture people like your Harry's characterization simply because he's just the most martyr hopeless guy that I've ever encountered reading in a fiction. But oddly, unexpectedly your story is very good. It's depicts the humanity in the main pairing. Voldermort is a class of his own here, really bloody stupid to realize his mate is the one he's hurting the most. I want to bash his head and grind his bones, did he really expect Harry to just be alright with him getting a bride, and children in the future and making Harry the one that raise his children. Really, what a fucking twisted man he really is, a monster in a human skin. I truly feel angered for Harry. Really wished it ends up really good and that Harry finally gets his mate without always hurting. Anyway, despite me having issues with too much angst and Harry's self torture, your story is rather cool and fun to read, and i find myself engage in reading for hours, and read it from the beginning to your last chapter. Hope there's an update coming up soon.