Cant wait to read more!

Good news chapter!

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Wow, I really liked the idea of this. Hope there's more to come. And Yes. Star you are a Grade A fragger :P

Love it! Please update soon! 3

It's funny first, interesting second and well-done third... and I'm looking forward to the rest. :-)

lol Im really liking this so far; Bluestreak is cute but struggling, Thundercracker is repressed, Starscream is a bitch, now we just need Skywarp!

Im worried about Blues glitch; it souns pretty serious, and I cant wait to see waht Thundercracker is hiding/not saying

I don't think words can describe how much I love this!

More, please? This is an awesome, well written story and I want to know what happens next.

Laughs. I just love the video call. I giggled during half that conversation. This is turning out to be rather cute and slightly depressing. I mean Blue's glitch adds a warning of utter failure and his bubbly personality is charismatic.

Sides and Sunny are well done as well. Sunny being somewhat cold but not entirely.

I also like how you pulled off the seekers. Starscream was perfect, oily sweet voice and impatient. Loved how he finally grew tired of Blue's banter while TC did not.

By the way, TC's character and how you portray him is wonderful. I can almost imagine this silent strong figure, with a constant frown in a militaristic back fall. I can't wait to see how you dissect his character.

Well done and I can't wait for more.

This is certainly a creative story idea, and I can't wait to see where you go with this. By the way

For sheer admiration of world-building, I’d recommend this fic to anyone at only two parts in. Bluestreak’s background and problems are slowly revealed, and he’s not an idiot. Sideswipe isn’t a pranking moron; Sunstreaker isn’t a violent sociopath. There are politics and societies that explain the ‘whys’ of everything in a way that are easy to follow because they’re logical. I can’t wait to see where this goes.

Oh, this is a neat beginning. Bluestreak/Thundercracker is a bit of a weakness of mine, so I'm really looking forward to seeing where this leads to. Can't wait to read more, thanks for posting!

You know, I wasn't really sure what I was expecting when I saw "mail ordered bride" in the description, but I'm sure glad I clicked (but that might be because of threesomes, I don't know). I defiantly love the premise of this, and am totally going to keep reading. I also didn't know it was you writing, I looked up at the end of chapter two, and instantly started laughing. I've seen your stuff on LJ, so I know this is going to be a good story. Looking forward to more!

I am grinning so hard right now. Seriously, I am just bursting with wanting this to work out, both for Blue and for Thundercracker. :D Descriptions of Blue's glitch, and his debt and everything else made me want to cuddle him, but the complete breakdown into Bluespeak just cinched it. And that little bit of shared amusement over Starscream...d'aaaw. (and oh Blue, you didn't ask the juicy question of why he wanted a Praxian!)

And Sunny and Sides were awesome in this. Both of them sharp and wry and funny in their own ways. I agree, I'm going to miss them!

Also, I cannot wait for Blue to meet Skywarp. :D